AMMANON

Fagan creates a complex and complete world in this fantasy novel about a nation on the brink of war.

The book begins with a glossary of characters, places and terms to help readers comprehend Ammanon, the Sparta-like nation of warriors at the center of the story. The title prophecy is introduced in the prologue, when young crown prince Galan and high priest Azzariah have visions of a woman who will someday help save the kingdom. A generation later, when Galan has become king, a strange young woman named Eydain arrives, and a plot against Ammanon by neighboring scholar nation Partha reveals itself. But the author has designs beyond the main characters and the two nations, which have their own distinct customs, traits, languages and personalities. She illustrates that Ammanon and Partha are two places on a densely populated map rather than simple, convenient metaphors to facilitate the action. There are countless subplots involving Eydain’s parents–former friends of the emperor and his family–and the queen mother Tsophyra and her brother, Gen. Toland, whose son is a promising cadet in the Temple Guard. Amazingly, all the characters add to the main plot–the tension between Galan and his captive bride Eydain, and the threat from Partha–rather than muddying the waters. There are real-world problems between nations, cultural prejudices and language barriers. Fagan is clearly at the beginning of an epic story and has much to draw from in future volumes. However, this presents some minor problems. The manner in which the action kicks off and Eydain discovers the Parthan plot feels a bit coincidental, and Ammanon never seems to be in real danger. Every threat is discovered quickly, every enemy dispatched with little trouble. Still, the virtues of this imagined world outweigh any issues with narrative development.

A fantasy tome that keeps readers invested.