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PROOF OF INTENT by William J. Coughlin

PROOF OF INTENT

by William J. Coughlin & Walter Sorrells

Pub Date: Nov. 11th, 2002
ISBN: 0-312-28066-1
Publisher: Dunne/St. Martin's

Legal eagle Coughlin (The Judgment, 1997, etc.) has been dead nearly ten years, but his best-loved creation, alcoholic defense attorney Charley Sloan, lives on courtesy of Sorrells (Power of Attorney, not reviewed, etc.) in this undernourished courtroom drama.

You have to wonder about a client who phones you past three in the morning, ahead of the police, to say that he’s just found his wife dead in their bedroom, and Charley does wonder about hard-boiled novelist Miles Dane, a former bestseller who’d returned from New York to buy into the most exclusive neighborhood in his Michigan hometown of Pickeral Point before his flagging sales had made him ever more pressed for cash—until the slaying of his wife Diana, whom he has thousands of motives to murder. Charley’s suspicions don’t abate when Miles starts his first chat with Detective Chantall Denkenberg by revising the story he told Charley. And when another of Charley’s clients, the even more raffish landscaping thief Leon James Prouty, spins a tale of a suspicious car outside the Dane domain on the murder night and Miles reacts by shutting down, both Charley and his daughter Lisa—another alcoholic who’s fled her last year at Columbia Law to help out the father she barely knows—figure they’ve got their work cut out for them. The crucial break comes when they realize Miles is covering up for somebody, but since it’s a somebody he won’t identify and they can’t subpoena, they’re forced to go to trial with nothing but reasonable doubt, as a hostile judge lands punch after punch to Charley’s head in preparation for the inevitable 15th-round knockout.

“Real life ain’t an Agatha Christie novel,” Miles sagely tells Charley after the final bell. And this case, which saves all its surprises and reversals for the very last minute, is more like a well-known Christie short story, first published in, say, 1949.