BOYS COME FIRST

An often funny debut novel about three friends searching for love and themselves in a rapidly gentrifying Detroit.

Dominick, Troy, and Remy, three Black gay men in Detroit, are at a key turning point in their lives. After having caught his boyfriend in bed with another man and gotten fired from his job on the same day, Dominick Gibson packed up his car, left Manhattan, and, as the book opens, is driving back to his mom’s house in Detroit. Dominick is unsure what’s next for him, but he feels the clock ticking: “Here he was now, thirty-three years old and with eight years with his ex, Justin, having led absolutely nowhere. Time was running out. Though when you’re Black, gay, and thirtysomething, time always feels like it’s running out.” Dominick reconnects with Troy Clements, his best friend, who's a socially minded teacher at The Mahaffey School in a neighborhood primed for “redevelopment”—or, in other words, bulldozers. Like so many Detroit residents, Troy is unsure about his city’s future. As he tells Dominick, “My worry is that it won’t be a Black city anymore. That it’s not going to belong to us like it used to. White people have started moving here in droves. Every time you look up—Dan Gilbert! New restaurant! New this, new that! And my thing is, I’m looking at my kids at Mahaffey and their families, and I know they won’t be able to keep up when it hits.” The final member of the trio is Troy's friend Remy Patton, a real estate agent who goes by “Mr. Detroit.” When Remy takes on a project that threatens Troy’s school, all three men have to decide where their loyalties lies. Foley’s novel paints a vivid picture of Detroit gentrification pushing African American residents out in favor of high-priced condos, bougie restaurants, and new, White residents. The novel also excels at showing the ups and downs of the dating scene in Detroit. Dominick, Troy, and Remy experience steamy hookups, genuine connections, awkward encounters with closeted White men from the suburbs, and even an attempted rape. Foley has created original, striking characters; unfortunately, alternating among all three points of view sacrifices some of the plot’s momentum. Each man goes through dramatic ups and downs, but the larger story gets lost along the way.

Sharp characters and a striking depiction of friendship within a story that never quite coheres.