CREEPING BEAUTY

A princess pricks her finger on a spindle—and falls through an alternate world in this retelling of “Sleeping Beauty.”

Elizabeth “Bitsy” Roix is the plain princess of the Roix Kingdom whose fate, whether she wishes it or not, is to be married off to someone her family considers appropriate. That is, until the day she pricks her finger on a spindle, falls deeply asleep, and everything changes. As her parents desperately try to break her curse, Bitsy wakes up in a different world—one of oppression, freedom fighters, and magic—where she attempts to carve a place for herself through a journey of self-empowerment that will have repercussions across worlds. This subversive take on the fairy tale “Sleeping Beauty” starts off well with a story that aims to empower its princess into breaking her own curse. Bitsy’s first-person narration is funny and engaging, sometimes breaking the fourth wall and addressing readers directly. Excerpts from her father’s journal complement the narrative and show another side of events. But the more the novel progresses, the more haphazard it becomes. The treatment of certain worldbuilding elements, including social inequalities and prejudices and a romance that grows from a shaky foundation, is superficial and ill-defined and never forms a cohesive whole. Bitsy and her family are cued White.

A fairy-tale retelling that aims high—and falls flat.