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THE FANTASTICAL EXPLOITS OF GWENDOLYN GRAY by B.A. Williamson

THE FANTASTICAL EXPLOITS OF GWENDOLYN GRAY

From the Gwendolyn Gray series, volume 2

by B.A. Williamson

Pub Date: April 28th, 2020
ISBN: 978-1-63163-435-2
Publisher: Jolly Fish Press

Gwendolyn travels through a library of tropes and narrative conventions to fight world-controlling villains.

Gwendolyn Gray, whose vermilion hair stands out in a world where most folks are blond, is dissatisfied with her City. At the end of series opener The Marvelous Adventures of Gwendolyn Gray (2018), when she traveled into a fictional world of airship pirates, she’d destroyed the mind-controlling Lambents that kept her City docile. And yet, even without the mind control, the City is still a toxic place full of conformity. It’s almost a relief when the Faceless Gentlemen reappear and chase Gwendolyn back into magical worlds. This time, she ends up in Faeoria, where Titania and Oberon reign, and a human “inventress” with clockwork wings takes Gwendolyn under them. To save herself and her City from various wicked forces, Gwendolyn must control her depression, mania, and anxiety. (These are mostly portrayed as a “sickness of the spirit” she must learn to manage as normal mental illness, but they are tied uncomfortably into magic and metaphor as well). The inventress protects Gwendolyn through a series of magical training montages, then sends her out into the (overwhelmingly white) multiverse to fight the baddies. A smart-alecky narrator breaks the fourth wall like a wrecking ball, with frequent metafictional asides and unobtrusive fixation on the age of the 13-year-old protagonist.

Too many plot twists, arch narrative asides, and last-minute fortune reversals make this adventure plod.

(Fantasy. 10-12)