While offering vibrant color photographs, this book delivers earnest, but uneven poems.
These collected verses, illustrated with the author’s own photographs, address themes of loss, grief, and memory.
Everyone endures the sadness of loss, whether it’s the death of loved ones, friendships changing, intimations of mortality, or time’s alterations. With this collection, DiMichele (In Grandma’s Shoes, 2013) aims to “share…a glimpse of how that sadness has touched me” over the last 30 years. “I trust this book will bring you peace and a knowledge that you do not grieve alone,” she writes. With these good intentions, it’s a shame that the book has such a generic greeting card feel. In “Distant Friends,” for example, composed upon the “change of a close friendship,” DiMichele writes: “Our lives have grown so distant / Our dreams so far apart / Yet always I have known / You are laced within my heart.” The iambic meter is typical of these verses, as is padding the lines out with the meaningless “so.” This meter is reinforced through end-stopped lines, giving the verse a singsong quality. As for the specific lives, dreams, and hearts of the speaker and her friend, they could be anybody’s, and this too is characteristic of the collection. The bulk of this work offers platitudes that in some cases can actually seem baffling rather than comforting, as in “Cycles,” written to parents on the death of their infant: “We watch life cycle everyday / We see it grow and fade away / … / What we must hold and not forget, / Is live each day with no regrets.” No regrets over a baby who died? The verses also suffer by employing language that was outdated a century ago: “thee,” “doth,” and “o’er.” When DiMichele makes closer, more original observations, the work displays more force: “We remember most how you liked not to be interrupted, / When you wanted someone to hear what you were saying // We have listened to you and have heard what you have said” (“A Breath in Time”). The author’s color photographs of nature are excellent, however: vivid and well composed.
While offering vibrant color photographs, this book delivers earnest, but uneven poems.Pub Date: April 28, 2016
ISBN: 978-1-5246-0092-1
Page Count: 88
Publisher: AuthorHouse
Review Posted Online: June 28, 2016
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
Therapeutic, moving verse from a promising new talent.
Keridan’s poetry testifies to the pain of love and loss—and to the possibility of healing in the aftermath.
The literary critic Geoffrey Hartman once wrote that literature—and poetry, in particular—can help us “read the wound” of trauma. That is, it can allow one to express and explain one’s deepest hurts when everyday language fails. Keridan appears to have a similar understanding of poetry. She writes in “Foreword,” the opening work of her debut collection, that “pain frequently uses words as an escape route / (oh, how I know).” Many words—and a great deal of pain—escape in this volume, but the result is healing: “the ending is happy / the beginning was horrific / so let’s start there.” The book, then, tracks the process of recovery in the wake of suffering, and often, this suffering is brought on by romantic relationships gone wrong. An early untitled poem opens, “I die a little / taking pieces of me to feed the fire / that keeps him warm / you don’t notice that it’s a slow death / when you’re disappearing little by little.” The author’s imagery here—of the self fueling the dying fire of love—is simultaneously subtle and wrenching. But the poem’s message, amplified elsewhere in the book, is clear: We go wrong if we destructively give ourselves over to others, and healing comes only when we turn our energies back to our own good. Later poems, therefore, reveal that self-definition often equals strength. The process is painful but salutary; when “you’re left unprotected / surrounded by chaos with nothing you / can depend on / except yourself / and that’s when you gather the pieces / of the life you lost / and use them to build the life you want.” The “life you want” is an elusive goal, and the author knows that the path to self-definition is fraught with peril—but her collection may give strength to those who walk it.
Therapeutic, moving verse from a promising new talent.Pub Date: Nov. 2, 2018
ISBN: 978-1-72770-538-6
Page Count: 196
Publisher: CreateSpace
Review Posted Online: Jan. 9, 2019
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Feb. 15, 2019
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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Downbeat but often engaging poems and stories.
A slim volume of largely gay-themed writings with pessimistic overtones.
Poe (Simple Simon, 2013, etc.) divides this collection of six short stories and 34 poems into five sections: “Art,” “Death,” “Relationship,” “Being,” and “Reflection.” Significantly, a figurative death at the age of 7 appears in two different poems, in which the author uses the phrase “a pretended life” to refer to the idea of hiding one’s true nature and performing socially enforced gender roles. This is a well-worn trope, but it will be powerful and resonant for many who have struggled with a stigmatized identity. In a similar vein, “Imaginary Tom” presents the remnants of a faded relationship: “Now we are imaginary friends, different in each other’s thoughts, / I the burden you seek to discard, / you the lover I created from the mist of longing.” Once in a while, short story passages practically leap off of the page, such as this evocative description of a seedy establishment in Lincoln, Nebraska: “It was a dimly lit bar that smelled of rodent piss, with barstools that danced on uneven legs and made the patrons wonder if they were drunker than they thought.” In “Valéry’s Ride,” Poe examines the familial duties that often fall to unmarried and childless people, keeping them from forming meaningful bonds with others. In this story, after the double whammy of Hurricanes Katrina and Rita hits Louisiana, Valéry’s extended family needs him more than ever; readers will likely root for the gay protagonist as he makes the difficult decision to strike out on his own. Not all of Poe’s main characters are gay; the heterosexual title character in “Mrs. Calumet’s Workspace,” for instance, pursues employment in order to escape the confines of her home and a passionless marriage. Working as a bookkeeper, she attempts to carve out a space for herself, symbolized by changes in her work area. Still, this story echoes the recurring theme of lives unlived due to forces often beyond one’s control.
Downbeat but often engaging poems and stories.Pub Date: Nov. 16, 2015
ISBN: 978-1-5168-3693-2
Page Count: 120
Publisher: CreateSpace
Review Posted Online: March 5, 2016
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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