While offering vibrant color photographs, this book delivers earnest, but uneven poems.
These collected verses, illustrated with the author’s own photographs, address themes of loss, grief, and memory.
Everyone endures the sadness of loss, whether it’s the death of loved ones, friendships changing, intimations of mortality, or time’s alterations. With this collection, DiMichele (In Grandma’s Shoes, 2013) aims to “share…a glimpse of how that sadness has touched me” over the last 30 years. “I trust this book will bring you peace and a knowledge that you do not grieve alone,” she writes. With these good intentions, it’s a shame that the book has such a generic greeting card feel. In “Distant Friends,” for example, composed upon the “change of a close friendship,” DiMichele writes: “Our lives have grown so distant / Our dreams so far apart / Yet always I have known / You are laced within my heart.” The iambic meter is typical of these verses, as is padding the lines out with the meaningless “so.” This meter is reinforced through end-stopped lines, giving the verse a singsong quality. As for the specific lives, dreams, and hearts of the speaker and her friend, they could be anybody’s, and this too is characteristic of the collection. The bulk of this work offers platitudes that in some cases can actually seem baffling rather than comforting, as in “Cycles,” written to parents on the death of their infant: “We watch life cycle everyday / We see it grow and fade away / … / What we must hold and not forget, / Is live each day with no regrets.” No regrets over a baby who died? The verses also suffer by employing language that was outdated a century ago: “thee,” “doth,” and “o’er.” When DiMichele makes closer, more original observations, the work displays more force: “We remember most how you liked not to be interrupted, / When you wanted someone to hear what you were saying // We have listened to you and have heard what you have said” (“A Breath in Time”). The author’s color photographs of nature are excellent, however: vivid and well composed.
While offering vibrant color photographs, this book delivers earnest, but uneven poems.Pub Date: April 28, 2016
ISBN: 978-1-5246-0092-1
Page Count: 88
Publisher: AuthorHouse
Review Posted Online: June 28, 2016
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
A volume of poetry that shines when focused on the author’s experiences of race and culture.
A collection speaks in part to the poet’s Mexican-American heritage.
In these multifaceted poems, Mexico-born, Houston-raised Salazar (Of Dreams and Thorns, 2017) explores general human themes like love and war in addition to specific experiences as a person of color. The book begins with a sensual meditation on desire, featuring luscious descriptions of a lover, from lips “moist like youth” to the body’s “softest velvet” slopes. The poems shift to odes to cultural icons like the Tejano star Selena and Mexican-German painter Frida Kahlo as well as occasion pieces honoring his brother’s 40th birthday and a friend’s mother’s memorial service. The author hits his stride when he delves into identity. In “I Am Not Brown,” he contemplates the societal implications of skin tone and his inability to fit into the rigid category of Caucasian or Latino. “For white and black and brown alike / Are slaves to history’s brush strokes,” he writes. “Grateful for the Work,” perhaps Salazar’s loveliest poem, catalogs the day of a laborer, starting with an early morning awakening and following him as he toils in 100-degree heat, enjoys tacos from his lunch pail, buys beverages from a child’s lemonade stand, and returns home to an equally hard-working wife. The author then makes an abrupt turn toward Syria in a series of poems that condemn that country’s president, Bashar Hafez al-Assad. They serve as a rallying cry for Syrians and grieve for the murdered masses. Salazar’s closing poem, “Sons of Bitches,” is a clunky rant about a 20-year-old immigrant shot in the head by a U.S. Customs and Border Patrol agent. The gratuitous violence and political theologizing are ill at ease with the intimate, personal experiences that preceded them, such as the fablelike “A Mexican is Made of This,” in which Salazar beautifully describes the “rainbows, bronze, backbone, butterflies” that his people embody.
A volume of poetry that shines when focused on the author’s experiences of race and culture.Pub Date: Aug. 1, 2018
ISBN: 978-0-9991496-3-8
Page Count: 166
Publisher: Bronze Diamond Productions
Review Posted Online: Sept. 27, 2018
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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Poems and images that ask readers to appreciate a searching body for its beauty and grace.
Diehl’s debut poetry collection showcases the arduous search for human connection and self-understanding.
In free verse poems that combine strong metaphors with prosaic passages, the poet wanders along a lifelong path of self-knowledge. She first describes it as a “pilgrimage…to accept what’s been deemed unworthy inside us,” and the trail leads to important insights. In a plainly stated yet necessary reminder, the author asserts that being human, despite the loneliness one may encounter, “is not a solitary pursuit.” Above all else, the book voices a desire for transparency in the self and in others. In “Clear Stream,” moving water illuminates objects within it, even as mystery waits at the bottom, and the water’s clarity corresponds to the speaker’s offering of his- or herself to view: “Here I am. // Come see me if you want.” Sometimes the tumble of words in these short stanzas suggests a pouring forth of injury: “It’s the show-stopping blow of loss upending a heart pain over pain till capacity for love regulates its beating.” Readers will understand a back story involving love and loss, difficulty in communication, sadness, and acceptance of children growing up. The poems gain strength from well-chosen accompanying images, including sketches and paintings by Dimenichi and colorful works by Jamaican-born painter Powell that enrich the verbal landscape. Several full-page images by each artist appear, suggesting a thematic connection or amplifying an emotion in a given poem. A richly textured, grand illustration of a tree by Dimenichi, for example, appears alongside a poem that celebrates the inspiration of such towering entities. A poem concerned with self-reflection joins a Powell painting of floating, twinned female forms. The figures seem to both depict and satisfy the speaker’s need to be seen, with their emphasis on mirror images, body doubles, and echoes of shapes. Even the windshield of a car can be a “two way mirror” behind which the driver is “invisible to life outside.” An explicitly female body is glimpsed in the sketches, and the warm, dreamlike compositions give it substance.
Poems and images that ask readers to appreciate a searching body for its beauty and grace.Pub Date: July 1, 2015
ISBN: 978-1-304-13091-4
Page Count: 58
Publisher: Lulu
Review Posted Online: May 18, 2016
Kirkus Reviews Issue: June 15, 2016
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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