Clichéd, overcomplicated plotting and muddled characterization thwart what could have otherwise been an effective potboiler...



A young business manager discovers love, life, and family legacy as she unveils the secrets of her adoption in this sophomore romance.

Five months after her legal guardian dies in a freak accident, Leila Isidro, business manager at New York’s prestigious Golden Leaves Hotel, discovers a diary belonging to her birth mother which promises to shed light on her adoption. The diary tells the story of author Myrna Clarisse Elmer’s blossoming, yet ultimately tragic, romance with a young businessman named Anders Isidro and provides a dramatic counterpoint to Leila’s own fledgling relationship with her boss, the mysterious Denis Fraga. Leila recently suffered the indignity of discovering her fiance’s infidelity moments before marriage and has since soured on romance—“love was just another word in the dictionary, and I was determined to keep it that way”—and when history threatens to repeat itself, she escapes to Florida. But Denis refuses to give her up, even when Leila finally returns to her Spanish birthplace to meet her birth mother. In the idyllic surroundings of Vigo Bay, she faces the ultimate dilemma: Rescue the family business from bankruptcy, or follow her heart and return with Denis to New York? Veteran romance readers may be able to guess her decision with ease, but they may yet be surprised by the convoluted ending. Elsewhere, the story is plagued with Oprea’s (Forever Rose, 2016) taste for the kind of melodramatic plot devices (twin brothers, a timely inheritance, coincidences galore) that would make Dickens blush as well as a romantic male lead who presents himself as a gaslighting sexual-harassment lawsuit in the making. Leila herself trades in the usual romantic clichés—barely a page goes by without some reference to heart palpitations—and yet her inner life remains curiously barren. Similarly, no amount of florid prose can explain or excuse her birth parent’s rampant solipsism and meaningless insistence that Leila “follow [her] heart.”   

Clichéd, overcomplicated plotting and muddled characterization thwart what could have otherwise been an effective potboiler romance.

Pub Date: Dec. 15, 2017

ISBN: 978-1-979964-18-0

Page Count: 374

Publisher: CreateSpace

Review Posted Online: Feb. 9, 2018

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Kin “[find] each other’s lives inscrutable” in this rich, sharp story about the way identity is formed.

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Inseparable identical twin sisters ditch home together, and then one decides to vanish.

The talented Bennett fuels her fiction with secrets—first in her lauded debut, The Mothers (2016), and now in the assured and magnetic story of the Vignes sisters, light-skinned women parked on opposite sides of the color line. Desiree, the “fidgety twin,” and Stella, “a smart, careful girl,” make their break from stultifying rural Mallard, Louisiana, becoming 16-year-old runaways in 1954 New Orleans. The novel opens 14 years later as Desiree, fleeing a violent marriage in D.C., returns home with a different relative: her 8-year-old daughter, Jude. The gossips are agog: “In Mallard, nobody married dark....Marrying a dark man and dragging his blueblack child all over town was one step too far.” Desiree's decision seals Jude’s misery in this “colorstruck” place and propels a new generation of flight: Jude escapes on a track scholarship to UCLA. Tending bar as a side job in Beverly Hills, she catches a glimpse of her mother’s doppelgänger. Stella, ensconced in white society, is shedding her fur coat. Jude, so black that strangers routinely stare, is unrecognizable to her aunt. All this is expertly paced, unfurling before the book is half finished; a reader can guess what is coming. Bennett is deeply engaged in the unknowability of other people and the scourge of colorism. The scene in which Stella adopts her white persona is a tour de force of doubling and confusion. It calls up Toni Morrison’s The Bluest Eye, the book's 50-year-old antecedent. Bennett's novel plays with its characters' nagging feelings of being incomplete—for the twins without each other; for Jude’s boyfriend, Reese, who is trans and seeks surgery; for their friend Barry, who performs in drag as Bianca. Bennett keeps all these plot threads thrumming and her social commentary crisp. In the second half, Jude spars with her cousin Kennedy, Stella's daughter, a spoiled actress.

Kin “[find] each other’s lives inscrutable” in this rich, sharp story about the way identity is formed.

Pub Date: June 2, 2020

ISBN: 978-0-525-53629-1

Page Count: 352

Publisher: Riverhead

Review Posted Online: March 15, 2020

Kirkus Reviews Issue: April 1, 2020

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More Hallmarkiana, from a shameless expert in the genre.


High-stakes weepmeister Sparks (A Walk to Remember, 1999, etc.) opts for a happy ending his fourth time out. His writing has improved—though it's still the equivalent of paint-by-numbers—and he makes use this time of at least a vestige of credible psychology.

That vestige involves the deep dark secret—it has something to do with his father's death when son Taylor was nine—that haunts kind, good 36-year-old local contractor Taylor McAden and makes him withdraw from relationships whenever they start getting serious enough to maybe get permanent. He's done this twice before, and now he does it again with pretty and sweet single mother Denise Holton, age 29, who's moved from Atlanta to Taylor's town of Edenton, North Carolina, in order to devote her time more fully to training her four-year-old son Kyle to overcome the peculiar impediment he has that keeps him from achieving normal language acquisition. Okay? When Denise has a car accident in a bad storm, she's rescued by volunteer fireman Taylor—who also rescues little Kyle after he wanders away from his injured mom in the storm. Love blooms in the weeks that follow—until Taylor suddenly begins putting on the brakes. What is it that holds him back, when there just isn't any question but that he loves Denise and vice versa-not to mention that he's "great" with Kyle, just like a father? It will require a couple of near-death experiences (as fireman Taylor bravely risks his life to save others); emotional steadiness from the intelligent, good, true Denise; and the terrible death of a dear and devoted friend before Taylor will come to the point at last of confiding to Denise the terrible memory of how his father died—and the guilt that's been its legacy to Taylor. The psychological dam broken, love will at last be able to flow.

More Hallmarkiana, from a shameless expert in the genre.

Pub Date: Sept. 19, 2000

ISBN: 0-446-52550-2

Page Count: 352

Publisher: N/A

Review Posted Online: May 20, 2010

Kirkus Reviews Issue: July 15, 2000

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