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IN THE YEAR OF LONG DIVISION by Dawn Raffel

IN THE YEAR OF LONG DIVISION

by Dawn Raffel

Pub Date: Jan. 16th, 1995
ISBN: 0-679-41581-5
Publisher: Knopf

From Redbook's fiction editor, 16 short stories (some of which have appeared in various literary magazines) that coolly explore the human heart in pared-down prose. Most of the tales are set in the Midwest, where the land and the lakes seem as menacing as the relationships within families, marriages, and friendships. Many, including the title story, are about childhood; reflecting today's conventional wisdom, Raffel's children are surrounded by disaster, dysfunction, and despair. In ``We Were Our Age,'' a young girl's friendship with a boy is shadowed by the drowning death of the boy's brother. The narrator of ``The Other R's'' recalls how she, her sister, and their mother became involved with a neighborhood tragedy when a family whose last name also began with R ``had something the matter with their baby.'' In ``Something Is Missing of Yours,'' a young girl caught in the middle of her parent's unhappiness struggles to find a refuge of her own. The most accomplished work is the title story, in which Raffel lets a snowstorm that closes streets and schools become a metaphor for sexual difference as two sisters observe the activities of the boys across the street, who ``were always breaking bones.'' Other notable tales describe a troubled marriage in which a husband bets that his wife will be seduced by a friend (``The Trick''); a confused old woman who goes to visit a doctor at an address a beloved, long-dead friend had once given her (``The Seer''); and two alienated people who head north on a surreal search for a mythical house that offers peace and security (``Nightjars''). The weakest piece in the collection is ``City of Portage,'' a brief, self-consciously metaphorical history of Wisconsin's founding seen through a widow's eyes. Original, clever, and finely wrought, but too minimalist to live. Low-fat lit in need of some nourishment.