Readers will be left wishing that the developers put the same effort into writing and translating the story as they did...
Poor translation mars an otherwise enjoyable app.
The traditional tale of the hardworking Little Red Hen has seen plenty of retellings in picture-book and app formats. This retelling follows the familiar route, emphasizing the moralistic ending. Readers are given the option of sharing or not sharing with the slackers. If readers choose the path of generosity, the pig, cat and dog “[apologize] to her with shame”; if readers opt not to share, the animals “[bow] their heads in shame.” The app is well-constructed, with pleasing narration, lively background music and smooth animation. The interactive elements are limited, which is appropriate for young children. While the colorful illustrations will charm young readers, the awkward and often incorrect English text presents substantial problems. Beginning on the first page, the translation makes for odd reading: The little hen lives with “her neighbors of kitten, puppy and piggy.” In some cases, the translation is so awkward that it makes little sense: “The seeds germinated soon and grew with spring mint wheat seedlings.” While readers will appreciate that this app is available in 5 languages (Chinese, English, French, Japanese and German), they expect proficient translations.
Readers will be left wishing that the developers put the same effort into writing and translating the story as they did creating all of the technical aspects of this app. (iPad 2 & up) (iPad storybook app. 3-6)Pub Date: Jan. 18, 2013
ISBN: N/A
Page Count: -
Publisher: DreamZ
Review Posted Online: March 12, 2013
Kirkus Reviews Issue: April 1, 2013
A wandering effort, happy but pointless.
The perfect book for kids who love dragons and mild tacos.
Rubin’s story starts with an incantatory edge: “Hey, kid! Did you know that dragons love tacos? They love beef tacos and chicken tacos. They love really big gigantic tacos and tiny little baby tacos as well.” The playing field is set: dragons, tacos. As a pairing, they are fairly silly, and when the kicker comes in—that dragons hate spicy salsa, which ignites their inner fireworks—the silliness is sillier still. Second nature, after all, is for dragons to blow flames out their noses. So when the kid throws a taco party for the dragons, it seems a weak device that the clearly labeled “totally mild” salsa comes with spicy jalapenos in the fine print, prompting the dragons to burn down the house, resulting in a barn-raising at which more tacos are served. Harmless, but if there is a parable hidden in the dragon-taco tale, it is hidden in the unlit deep, and as a measure of lunacy, bridled or unbridled, it doesn’t make the leap into the outer reaches of imagination. Salmieri’s artwork is fitting, with a crabbed, ethereal line work reminiscent of Peter Sís, but the story does not offer it enough range.
A wandering effort, happy but pointless. (Picture book. 3-5)Pub Date: June 14, 2012
ISBN: 978-0-8037-3680-1
Page Count: 40
Publisher: Dial Books
Review Posted Online: March 27, 2012
Kirkus Reviews Issue: April 15, 2012
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A disappointing follow-up.
Inventor Izzy Gizmo is back in this sequel to her eponymous debut (2017).
While busily inventing one day, Izzy receives an invitation from the Genius Guild to their annual convention. Though Izzy’s “inventions…don’t always work,” Grandpa (apparently her sole caregiver) encourages her to go. The next day they undertake a long journey “over fields, hills, and waves” and “mile after mile” to isolated Technoff Isle. There, Izzy finds she must compete against four other kids to create the most impressive machine. The colorful, detail-rich illustrations chronicle how poor Izzy is thwarted at every turn by Abi von Lavish, a Veruca Salt–esque character who takes all the supplies for herself. But when Abi abandons her project, Izzy salvages the pieces and decides to take Grandpa’s advice to create a machine that “can really be put to good use.” A frustrated Izzy’s impatience with a friend almost foils her chance at the prize, but all’s well that ends well. There’s much to like: Brown-skinned inventor girl Izzy is an appealing character, it’s great to see a nurturing brown-skinned male caregiver, the idea of an “Invention Convention” is fun, and a sustainable-energy invention is laudable. However, these elements don’t make up for rhymes that often feel forced and a lackluster story.
A disappointing follow-up. (Picture book. 3-6)Pub Date: March 1, 2020
ISBN: 978-1-68263-164-5
Page Count: 32
Publisher: Peachtree
Review Posted Online: Jan. 11, 2020
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Feb. 1, 2020
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