GIRL IN THE WALLS

After a tragedy, a young Louisiana girl returns to her former home, though there's another family already living in it.

After a car accident leaves 11-year-old Elise on her own, she finds herself wandering off from the foster home where she's been placed and back to the beloved house she grew up in, a mazelike structure that her parents were always working on. She finds an unlocked door and makes herself at home again. The only problem? Elise's family had moved out a few months earlier, and the house is now owned by the Mason family: Laura, Nick, and teenagers Marshall and Eddie. While the parents seem oblivious to anything going on, Eddie notices a presence in his room while Marshall tries to track down who ate the food he put aside for himself. How long can a girl secreted in the walls keep her presence hidden, and who might seek her out? Split into five parts, Gnuse’s debut tale is tense but not a thriller. There is always the threat of discovery hanging in the air, but the story focuses more on meandering meditations on Elise’s coping (or lack thereof) with the loss of her parents, Eddie’s vague differences from others his age, or Nick and Laura’s marital problems. Gnuse explores interesting ideas about masculinity as Marshall and Eddie attempt to “man up” and take care of their hidden-person problem in the face of their parents’ disbelief. As the situation spirals out of control for them, there are some genuinely frightening moments. However, despite the anxiety induced by the title, the plot is quite stagnant, mostly revolving around the fact that there is, indeed, a girl in the walls. A reader looking for more of a cat-and-mouse game will be disappointed.

More meditation than page-turner, a coming-of-age tale with a twist.