Entertaining, but the writing could be stronger.
With star-crossed love a blight on her family, a young woman reluctantly works with Hades to break the curse in Book 3 of this fantasy series.
In Fathoms Below (2016) and Fathoms Above (2017), Holt told the story of Cather Stevens, an American high school cheerleader and the descendant of a long line of women with broken hearts. From the Greek god Hermes, she learned that Zeus’ long-ago curse on Thisbe to prevent her union to Pyramus has recurred many times in Cather’s family line. Cather married Peter Ganis—last living descendant of Pyramus—to end the curse. He has strong feelings for her, but she’s torn between Peter and Hermes. The curse won’t be fully broken until the 10 lost pieces of Thisbe’s soul that were scattered by Zeus are reunited within Cather. A clue points to Greece, where the newlyweds and Hermes find several soul pieces while dodging fearsome attacks by Zeus-sent killers. But when Peter is tricked and falls into a coma, Hermes must watch over him while Cather gathers pieces and looks for Peter’s cure. She has a shady ally in Hades, who agrees to help so he can get back at Zeus. As the two venture up mountains and under sea, facing gods and battling monsters, Cather recovers all except the last soul piece—but she may be a pawn in a larger game. The story will continue in the next planned volume, Fathoms Across. Holt ably combines romance and mythology with an emphasis on action. The gods and mythological creatures are well-conceived in both traditional and present-day manifestations; Hades, for example, fights cage matches on Earth. Although Holt does provide exposition, readers unfamiliar with the first two installments may find Cather’s deep feelings about Peter and Hermes somewhat abstract. A drawback is the abundance of annoyingly repetitive tics, such as the phrase “Trust me” and characters smirking or drawling. Also irritating is “quipped” used with ordinary remarks like “No” or “Wow.”
Entertaining, but the writing could be stronger.Pub Date: Oct. 2, 2018
ISBN: 978-1-983497-28-5
Page Count: 344
Publisher: CreateSpace
Review Posted Online: Sept. 2, 2018
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
Well-drawn characters and playful twists keep this thriller fully charged.
This YA SF novel features a teen who must halt a virus that will kill two-thirds of humanity.
In Silver Oak, Maryland, Alice Sherman is a high school junior enjoying lunch near her campus basketball court. With her is Archie, her brother, a senior and science prodigy who likes equations more than his fellow students. Alice has been Archie’s one true friend since their mother left six years ago. Alice is about to catch up with Lalana Bunyasarn, her best friend, when a sudden “streak of electricity zaps through” her head. The agony intensifies until a Voice enters Alice’s mind, asking her, “Do you want this pain to stop?” The Voice then instructs her to go up to Bandit Sakda, a classmate playing basketball, and say that she loves him. Bandit is a beautiful Thai boy who’s talented and arrogant. Strangely, the Voice calls her Malice and says not to fall for him because “it’ll only make what you have to do later harder.” Eventually, Alice learns that the Voice belongs to someone from 10 years in the future who needs help saving humanity. A virus will be created by a person Alice knows that will wipe out two-thirds of the world population. Following the Voice’s directions can save everyone—except the person Alice is ordered to kill. Dunn’s (Star-Crossed, 2018, etc.) latest YA adventure offers increasingly tantalizing twists that gleam in succession like nested matryoshka dolls. Alice will charm readers with her quirks, especially her devotion to Chris Hemsworth of Marvel’s Avengers films. Tension builds as characters in the large cast, including crushworthy Zeke Cain and the brilliant Cristela Ruiz, become potential targets for Alice’s mission. Details about Thai culture add a splendid dimension to the narrative; for example, Bandit is pronounced “bun-dit” and means “one who is wise.” While the notion of a high school killer may not sit well with some, the author doesn’t use the device lightly. Her book takes a strong anti-bullying stance, doing so through an entertaining narrative that doesn’t resort to preaching. The author’s heart and craftiness make a sequel welcome.
Well-drawn characters and playful twists keep this thriller fully charged.Pub Date: Feb. 4, 2020
ISBN: 978-1-64063-412-1
Page Count: 400
Publisher: Entangled Teen
Review Posted Online: Jan. 16, 2020
Kirkus Reviews Issue: March 15, 2020
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
Any moral that may be gleaned from the tangled narrative is buried in confusion. (Fantasy. YA)
A convoluted fantasy offering a series of morals about justice, mercy, human treatment of animals and human treatment of other humans.
A cluster of animals have been educated by a World War II veteran and his activist wife. The animals, a now-vegetarian mix of carnivores, herbivores and omnivores, live in harmony on Cloudburst Mountain. Following their scriptures (the Bible, Animal Farm and judgments such as “Humans Are Evil”), they plan for the day when they will kill all the humans and rule the world. The tale follows the adventures of their coyote prophet Justice and human ally Cody as they travel the United States preparing other animals for “The Rebellion.” Though they meet mostly repellent, violent humans and mistreated animals, they also encounter enough well-meaning, victimized humans to make Cody question his alliance with the cause of human genocide. Meanwhile, the grandson of the original human missionaries to the animals threatens the entire endeavor as he plans to mine the mountain for uranium. Ultimately, the animals succeed in murdering the vast majority of the human race, giving them hope for a shining new day. This overly complex tale is dense with purple prose and far too many extraneous characters–for example, Gordon “Raindance” Fell, the Shadow Shaman of the Pokihallah tribe; and Forest Victor, who appears for the first time late in the story, saying of his never-mentioned-before dead wife, “if only her hatred of the evil deeds of the baby seal killers hadn’t drawn her and her cameras into a combative stance.”
Any moral that may be gleaned from the tangled narrative is buried in confusion. (Fantasy. YA)Pub Date: June 21, 2006
ISBN: 0-595-39274-1
Page Count: -
Publisher: N/A
Review Posted Online: May 23, 2010
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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