MOTHER LAND

Rachel, an aimless American newlywed, moves to Mumbai with her husband, Dhruv.

Soon after, his mother, Swati, leaves her husband and life in Kolkata to move in with her son and his new wife. Soon after that, Dhruv’s company sends him to work on a monthlong project in Kolkata, making the women unlikely roommates. The chapters alternate between Rachel's and Swati’s close third-person perspectives, but unfortunately, neither of them contain enough complexity to carry the story. During an argument with Dhruv, Rachel thinks, “He sounded like his father, or like some stereotype from a movie, a cartoon figure, the generic ‘disapproving male.’ ” But the same might be said of the women, who are little more than stale types themselves. Rachel is the quintessential individualistic American. Loving to cook makes up the bulk of her personality. Swati is a traditional Indian woman discovering herself beyond the roles of wife and mother late in life. She insists on hiring a cook against Rachel’s wishes because that is the way things are done among a certain class of Indians. The cook conflict represents the power struggle between the two women, whose desires turn out to be more similar than different, predictably, but it’s too one-note. Both women spend an awful lot of time alone, fuming about the other and ruminating on their own experiences. Rachel stumbles into voice-over work for an Estonian soap opera that’s far more interesting than her own brooding. By the time the plot takes off in the novel's final quarter, when a friend of Rachel’s visiting Mumbai forces her to confront hard truths about her choices and Swati finds a love interest, it’s too late. The friction between Rachel and Swati is belabored and the friendship that eventually develops between them, belated.

A slow story that misses the mark.