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MORE THAN FLUFF by Madeline Valentine

MORE THAN FLUFF

by Madeline Valentine ; illustrated by Madeline Valentine

Pub Date: March 9th, 2021
ISBN: 978-0-593-17905-5
Publisher: Knopf

Animals disregard, and then learn about, consent.

Daisy, a yellow chick who “happen[s] to be very fluffy,” endures attention familiar to anyone growing up little and cute. Other animals grin in her direction, squeezing: “Aren’t you the cutest thing?” and “I could just eat you up” (that inherent threat is more pronounced in the animal kingdom). “They [squeeze] her” and “[kiss] her” and “[pop] up out of nowhere and [try] to hug her,” and that “ruffle[s] Daisy’s feathers.” She tries avoiding the unwanted affection by covering herself in mud, running, and hiding, until she eventually loses her temper, pecks a turtle on the nose, and yells “I AM MORE THAN FLUFF!” This powerful beginning quickly pivots to a wooden emphasis on polite behavior, as Mom encourages Daisy to try “telling them how you feel…nicely.” Daisy then starts saying things like “Actually, it’s time for you to give me some personal space,” and “I don’t want a hug. But thanks for offering.” And she apologizes for pecking the turtle (who, quite frankly, deserved it). The strong emotions evoked in the beginning of this story move aside in favor of the idea that it’s important to be nice to people who are exerting power over you. Boundaries and consent are important for young readers, but the conclusion here disappoints. (This book was reviewed digitally with 11-by-17-inch double-page spreads viewed at 19.1% of actual size.)

Potentially appropriate as bibliotherapy but otherwise unsatisfying. (Picture book. 4-7)