WHERE EAGLES DANCE by Marian  Sepulveda


A Saga of Early California
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A white orphan girl finds refuge with a Native American tribe in 1850s California in this debut historical novel.

On the very first page, redheaded 10-year-old Abigail Bristol is running for her life after a wagon-train attack by renegade Native Americans has killed most of the party, including her parents. She is found by members of the peaceful Kumeyaay tribe. They take her in and teach her their ways, knowing that she must eventually rejoin white society. This is an idyllic time, but, once past puberty, she must make a choice between Night Wolf, a Yuma warrior, and Jim Cassidy, who comes looking for a wife. She selects Cassidy and the white world. Cassidy is a good man, but try as she might, Abby does not love him. Enter the Butterfield Overland Mail in the person of John Butterfield’s son, John Jay. Readers know immediately that John Jay and Abby are meant for each other. Cassidy is conveniently killed in a raid on the Butterfield Overland station, but the path of true love is tortuous, involving Abby’s rescue by Night Wolf; the depredations of a smooth and despicable man named Everett Drayton; the serendipitous finding of Danny, an orphaned street urchin; the return, time and again, of Abby’s sinister Uncle Jacob; and several other complications. And then there’s Abby’s championing of the horribly mistreated Kumeyaay. A not-very-subtle subtext is the tension between white and Native American societies and the murderous prejudices that abound.

Sepulveda’s novel, clearly a labor of love, nicely blends fact and fiction in mid-19th-century California and includes a plucky heroine and a couple of hunky heroes. The book, though long— more than 450 pages—is an easy read because, for the most part, readers see the action through the eyes of Abby (an exception is the section with John Jay and the first Butterfield Overland run). Chapters segue smoothly. And the author has created an admirable—and believable—character in Abby, grappling with two worlds and sympathetic to the Native Americans when most whites consider them subhuman. Other historical details are arresting, as when John Jay lovingly describes the work that goes into an Abbott and Downing stagecoach. The fate of the Kumeyaay tribe is appalling, though Abby, John Jay, and others do much to make amends. But the book is not without flaws. John Jay and Night Wolf are both described in terms that befit bodice-rippers, as when the former’s torso is shown “rippling with muscles that made” Abby’s mouth “go dry.” Often, too, when Abby gets into a situation where escape seems impossible, someone—Night Wolf, John Jay, Danny—shows up right on time to rescue her. Similarly, John Jay just happens to be there when Drayton’s thugs capture Danny. There is a lot of dei ex machina going on here. Of special note: Uncle Jacob, a truly dangerous religious fanatic, improbably becomes a completely changed man when his mousy wife dresses him down. But on balance, this is an admirable debut and worth reading—worth, in fact, getting lost in.

An engrossing tale about a spunky heroine caught between two worlds in the Old West.

Pub Date: June 6th, 2017
ISBN: 978-0-9905827-4-8
Page count: 467pp
Publisher: Aqua Zebra
Program: Kirkus Indie
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