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ALBA IULIA by Mark L. Williams

ALBA IULIA

Prelude

by Mark L. Williams

ISBN: 978-1-951886-60-8
Publisher: Book Vine Press

An American becomes entranced by a Romanian figure skater in this novel of intersecting lives and Cold War hostilities.

As soon as he finishes his military service, Miles Nelson decides to enjoy the scenery: “After my Army hitch, I became European tumbleweed.” In Prague, he meets Matt, another expat and an adventurous hippie, and the two of them enjoy sampling Czech beer together. When Matt convinces Miles they should crash the Olympics in nearby Innsbruck, Austria, Miles has his first encounter with Simone Albescu, a Romanian figure skater who captures his attention. Simone is good but clearly not the best. As Miles puts it, “Her leaps were low-altitude demonstrations of power, but her moves were exceedingly graceful and polished.” He goes on: “To say that I found her attractive would be a lie, but there was a quality of intelligence and determination that earned my instant admiration.” Improbably, she later introduces herself to him and vigorously shakes his hand. Only later does Miles realize Simone is staging a small rebellion against her authoritarian overlords, who wish to control her every move. Miles and Simone next meet in Chicago, where Miles, working for a posh hotel, is able to assist her when her coach defects to the U.S, escaping their assigned Romanian security handlers. Their lives go on: Miles ends up in Cedar Falls, Iowa, where he falls for a woman named Ellen Good but can’t figure out why he holds back from her. Of course, it’s because of the figure skater, who reenters his life after her own defection. As Simone struggles to find a life beyond skating, and away from her Romanian family and home, Miles finds yet another opportunity to help her—and to make a bid for her affections.

The writing is engaging, guided by Miles’ intelligent and sharp-edged humor. His eloquent voice gives the novel plenty of sentence-level pleasures. Williams has an impressive eye for descriptions and analogies, which stud the narrative like well-cut gems. His powers grant Miles a voice adept at describing people and places. Of Ohio, Miles notes: “Ohio is, alas, Ohio. It is an unsatisfactory mix between corporate and agricultural America.” Of his military career, Miles states: “I shot up the ranks like a Fourth-of-July rocket” and then “slammed into the apathy wall.” He describes a shocked character whose “eyes changed color,” and he notes how Ellen “injected little jests into the conversation.” Ellen is a puzzling piece in the book, a charming presence Miles loves and takes for granted. “I fell in love with her instantly,” he confesses, but he does all he can to ensure they drift apart. When he finally admits to himself that he’s loved Simone for years, his hesitance makes more sense. Occasionally, Williams strains too hard for an erudite tone, giving the prose a grating and inhuman stiffness: “I was never morose, but felicity never found me there” is how Miles explains his unease with Chicago. Similarly, Miles’ wiseacre routine and penchant for drollery grow a little tiresome; fortunately, Williams gives him redeeming moments of sincerity. “It’s you I want,” he says to Simone. “I’ve loved you for years.”

A romance barbed with wit and humor.