BRASS ANKLE BLUES

Plodding coming-of-age debut starring 15-year-old Nellie Kincaid, who has just learned that her parents, Malcolm and Virginia, are separating.

The Kincaids normally spend their summers at the family compound in rural Minnesota, but this year things are different. And it’s not just the impending separation; for the first time, Nellie’s two older brothers and her mother won’t be spending the season at the lake. This summer finds Nellie traveling with her father (an English professor) and her estranged cousin, Jess, toward the cottage. The trip has barely begun, however, when the family Volvo bursts into flames. Nellie and Jess opt to take Greyhound the rest of the way, but at a rest stop, they miss the bus’s departure and are forced to hitchhike. The girls have a few close encounters with potential perverts, but finally hitch a ride with handsome 19-year-old Dallas. Smitten with Nellie, Dallas takes a summer construction job with a local contractor; over the coming weeks, Nellie realizes she’s attracted to both Dallas and her summer neighbor, Luke. As a young woman of mixed race, Nellie has always felt a bit of an outsider—something that Luke can’t really understand, but Dallas, who is Sioux, can. As the summer progresses, we learn slightly more about the rift between Nellie’s parents and the reason for their separation (Virginia’s multiple affairs), and Nellie finds out more about her mother’s adolescence—knowledge that brings her misery, not peace. Harper’s prose can be clunky: “ ‘Confront’ is so similar to ‘comfort.’ This is what runs through my head when I go in search of my mother,” and her plotting is a bit heavy-handed, with fire both opening and closing the story.

Uninspired.