In Elliot-Square’s debut thriller, an entrepreneur’s greed gets him embroiled with a high-powered—and dangerous—tycoon.
Entrepreneur Nick Adams is on the cusp of the riches as the stock price of his software company, Adams Banking Solutions, soars. But all is not well in Adams’ world. His company has been funded by Kersch & Co., a dubious finance company notorious for “pump and dump” stock schemes. Naturally, Adams worries his deal with the devil will backfire, so before this can happen, he cashes in his ABS stocks, hiding his new-found millions in a Swiss bank. Soon after, someone murders Adams’ friend, finance investigative journalist Howard Wayne. Turns out, Wayne had information that could sink not only Kersch & Co. but the company’s main backer, the infamous, evil Swiss banker, Gerhard Liebs. Peter Kersch, infuriated by Adams’ stock dump, tries to oust him from ABS. Ultimately, Adams catches the attention of Dillon Rae, an FBI agent heading up a new division called the Taxation Repatriation Unit. Rae, wanting to make a name for himself, looks to bring down Liebs. Using threats of jail, Rae “convinces” Adams to help entrap the Swiss tycoon. There is much that is promising here. The plot is intricate and engrossing, and it’s clear the author knows the stock trading game. And Adams, the main character, while certainly flawed, generates empathy. Too often, however, Elliot-Square’s novel is undone by careless proofing mistakes throughout, such as misplaced quotation marks or commas. Moreover, Liebs is a villain more suited for a comic book than a novel—a man who contemplates his “next dastardly move.” Similarly, unrealistic character attributes appear out of nowhere. Take for example, a car-chase scene at the end, when the reader conveniently finds out that Adams had been a “stock car driver in his teens.” These flaws distract, but Elliot-Square does manage to build suspense.
An engaging finance thriller foiled by plot flubs and typos.
A highly organized, informative discussion of the immigration system in the United States.
In this politically charged environment, Afrasiabi manages to broach the volatile issue of immigration in a well-rounded, surprisingly effective framework that combines case studies, historical research, statistical analysis and personal anecdotes to detail the current issues and propose solutions. Invocations of Kafka, “The Twilight Zone” and “Alice in Wonderland” prove warranted as illustrations of the often surreal circumstances that confront immigrants facing deportation. Immigrants usually lack access to quality legal representation, while their situation can be made doubly difficult due to language barriers and significant cultural differences. Afrasiabi incorporates his work with colleagues and students at the Chapman University School of Law to deftly weave together the facts of several compelling cases and their underlying legal issues, with a genuine sense of suspense as readers wonder if justice will be truly be served. Occasionally, though, the narrative becomes overwrought—two federal laws passed in 1996 are “dark storm clouds depositing their sleet”—although, considering the life-changing effects of court decisions, it’s difficult to overstate the ramifications: extralegal rendition of individuals with pending cases and the de facto deportation of native-born children whose parents are deported. Afrasiabi also addresses the legacy of various anti-alien laws in California, as well as marriage equality for same-sex couples when one partner is a noncitizen. As the subtitle asserts, Afrasiabi employs his additional experience in the field of property law to contrast the stark differences between immigration judges and constitutional judges, like their qualifications, vetting processes and even the oaths they take. His arguments culminate in seven concrete reforms proposed in the conclusion. In order to make the immigration system more just and effective, Afrasiabi claims the solutions are closer than we may think; we can implement procedures and safeguards already in place within the constitutional courts.
A persuasive, valuable addition to the ongoing immigration reform debate.
Walkley pits CIA agents against a maniacal Saudi prince intent on starting World War III in this debut thriller.
Delta Force operative Lee McCloud, aka Mac, finds himself in Mexico, trying to rescue two teenage girls kidnapped by a drug cartel. But things go from bad to worse when the villains don’t play by the rules. Framed for two murders he didn’t commit, Mac has two options: go to prison or go to work for a CIA black-op group run by the devious Wisebaum, who hacks into terrorists’ bank accounts and confiscates millions of dollars. However, there’s more going on than meets the eye; Saudi Prince Khalid is in possession of nuclear canisters, with which he hopes to alter world history. Khalid also dabbles in trafficking young women, and harvesting and selling human organs. When Wisebaum’s black-op team targets Khalid’s father, the action becomes even more intense. With so many interweaving subplots—kidnapped girls, Israeli undercover agents, nuclear weapons and a secret underwater hideout—it could be easy to lose track of what’s going on. But the author’s deft handling of the material ensures that doesn’t occur; subplots are introduced at the appropriate junctures and, by story’s end, all are accounted for and neatly concluded. Mac is portrayed as a rough and ready action-hero, yet his vulnerabilities will evoke empathy in readers. He finds a love interest in Tally, a hacker whose personality is just quirky enough to complement his own. All Walkley’s primary characters are fleshed out and realistic, with the exception of Wisebaum—a malicious, double-dealing, back-stabber of the worst ilk; the reader is left wondering about Wisebaum’s motivations behind such blatant treachery.
Despite this, Walkley’s beefy prose and rousing action sequences deliver a thriller to satisfy any adrenaline addict.