Substandard writing on a hackneyed theme.
A trite and uniformly mediocre collection of verse and occasional prose on the ins and outs of love.
Rima Jbara was born in Damascus in 1979, and though she does not say so, one assumes that English is not her native tongue. For A Dream for Two, which the author describes as “a collection of love bites,” is a mix of substandard poetry, stale aphorisms and questionable prose that could as easily have been produced by a middle-schooler with a big crush. The volume opens with Jbara’s poetry: brief, lazy free verse with short lines and slim content. Her idiomatic arsenal is limited, and when describing her love, her trustiest tool is a simple, less-than-original simile. Hence, she is “like [a] farmer / who wants to take care of you”; life without her lover “is like autumn” when “everything dies”; later, “Rose petals / That fell on me / To caress my body / Is like your love” (subject-verb agreement issues aside); away from her paramour, she’s “like a zombie.” Such basic verse is tiresome fare, but Jbara is not finished. Two of the next three sections are filled with one- or two-sentence fragments–one to a page–on (surprise, surprise) love and relationships. It’s unclear why she needed an entire page for quotes like “If you are the man not meant for me, then I don’t want any other man” and “You make me feel as if I am walking on clouds.” One of the final sections (more poetry, alas) takes an erotic turn, giving Jbara the chance to write–in the hilariously titled “Lick Your Dipping”–the classic lines, “You don’t need sugar / To taste better / You don’t need honey / To become more stickier.” In an author’s note, Jbara lists her previous bestselling novels, and all credit is due for having written each one. But it is clear, at least for now, that her poetry and short prose need much work.
Substandard writing on a hackneyed theme.Pub Date: Feb. 18, 2008
ISBN: 978-1-4196-7407-5
Page Count: -
Publisher: N/A
Review Posted Online: May 23, 2010
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
The phrase “tour de force” could have been invented for this audacious novel.
Four men who meet as college roommates move to New York and spend the next three decades gaining renown in their professions—as an architect, painter, actor and lawyer—and struggling with demons in their intertwined personal lives.
Yanagihara (The People in the Trees, 2013) takes the still-bold leap of writing about characters who don’t share her background; in addition to being male, JB is African-American, Malcolm has a black father and white mother, Willem is white, and “Jude’s race was undetermined”—deserted at birth, he was raised in a monastery and had an unspeakably traumatic childhood that’s revealed slowly over the course of the book. Two of them are gay, one straight and one bisexual. There isn’t a single significant female character, and for a long novel, there isn’t much plot. There aren’t even many markers of what’s happening in the outside world; Jude moves to a loft in SoHo as a young man, but we don’t see the neighborhood change from gritty artists’ enclave to glitzy tourist destination. What we get instead is an intensely interior look at the friends’ psyches and relationships, and it’s utterly enthralling. The four men think about work and creativity and success and failure; they cook for each other, compete with each other and jostle for each other’s affection. JB bases his entire artistic career on painting portraits of his friends, while Malcolm takes care of them by designing their apartments and houses. When Jude, as an adult, is adopted by his favorite Harvard law professor, his friends join him for Thanksgiving in Cambridge every year. And when Willem becomes a movie star, they all bask in his glow. Eventually, the tone darkens and the story narrows to focus on Jude as the pain of his past cuts deep into his carefully constructed life.
The phrase “tour de force” could have been invented for this audacious novel.Pub Date: March 10, 2015
ISBN: 978-0-385-53925-8
Page Count: 720
Publisher: Doubleday
Review Posted Online: Dec. 21, 2014
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Jan. 1, 2015
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A first novel, this is also a first person account of Scout's (Jean Louise) recall of the years that led to the ending of a mystery, the breaking of her brother Jem's elbow, the death of her father's enemy — and the close of childhood years. A widower, Atticus raises his children with legal dispassion and paternal intelligence, and is ably abetted by Calpurnia, the colored cook, while the Alabama town of Maycomb, in the 1930's, remains aloof to their divergence from its tribal patterns. Scout and Jem, with their summer-time companion, Dill, find their paths free from interference — but not from dangers; their curiosity about the imprisoned Boo, whose miserable past is incorporated in their play, results in a tentative friendliness; their fears of Atticus' lack of distinction is dissipated when he shoots a mad dog; his defense of a Negro accused of raping a white girl, Mayella Ewell, is followed with avid interest and turns the rabble whites against him. Scout is the means of averting an attack on Atticus but when he loses the case it is Boo who saves Jem and Scout by killing Mayella's father when he attempts to murder them. The shadows of a beginning for black-white understanding, the persistent fight that Scout carries on against school, Jem's emergence into adulthood, Calpurnia's quiet power, and all the incidents touching on the children's "growing outward" have an attractive starchiness that keeps this southern picture pert and provocative. There is much advance interest in this book; it has been selected by the Literary Guild and Reader's Digest; it should win many friends.
Pub Date: July 11, 1960
ISBN: 0060935464
Page Count: 323
Publisher: Lippincott
Review Posted Online: Oct. 7, 2011
Kirkus Reviews Issue: July 1, 1960
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