A good idea with promising characters scuttled by too many pages.
Something mysterious lurks within the Oklahoma woods.
Maine resident Chrystal has been planning on summering at the lake with her friends or visiting New York City with her mom and stepfather—anything but indulging her amateur cryptozoologist father’s Bigfoot obsession. But after a bloody incident occurs in Cherokee County, Oklahoma, Chrystal is packed off with her dad and finds herself heading toward the dark woods to investigate. Once there, Chrystal meets Logan, the cute farm boy who witnessed the attack. The presumably white teens grow close as they investigate the monster and the attacks increase in number and bloodshed. Presenting chapters narrated from Logan’s and Chrystal’s perspectives, the authors create engaging teen protagonists and a solidly structured mythology for the monster. There’s a promising start with some good character development and smartly constructed scares. The problem here is a lack of judicious editing: At about 350 pages, the horror story’s atmosphere and spookiness slip away, leaving long patches where information is repeated, and the characters aren’t given enough opportunity for further exploration. There just isn’t enough meat on the bone to justify this length. The monster’s terrorizing presence is blunted over time, and readers who are trying to figure out the who and why of this mystery will be plenty disappointed.
A good idea with promising characters scuttled by too many pages. (Thriller. 12-17)Pub Date: July 16, 2019
ISBN: 978-0-7653-3655-2
Page Count: 352
Publisher: Tor Teen
Review Posted Online: April 6, 2019
Kirkus Reviews Issue: May 15, 2019
Interesting plot twists almost carry endless pages of Forbidden Love.
Real sexual tension apparently requires all the divine forces in the universe be arrayed against you, if this book is any guide.
Demigods and erstwhile lovers Helen and Lucas can never be together, because they're secretly first cousins. Just in case the couple realizes that relationships between cousins aren't considered incest in their home state of Massachusetts (or 24 other states in the union), Lucas's father explains that the future of the demigod species, nay, of the entire planet depends on the couple staying apart. Because! Of history! And magical things! And could Lucas just stop being so selfish? Lucas responds by pretending to hate Helen, following the standard tortured-angsty-boy recipe for staying away from his girlfriend. Poor Helen, meanwhile, is spending all her sleeping hours traveling the Underworld. She hopes to defeat the Furies and end the senseless feuding that has tormented the semi-divine Scions since the Trojan War, but she can't seem to make any headway in the blasted hellscape of the Underworld. Not to mention, her magical journeys are keeping her from REM sleep, thus probably killing her. At least she's met a hot new Scion in the Underworld to fill the vacancy Lucas left by being such a meanie.
Interesting plot twists almost carry endless pages of Forbidden Love. (Paranormal romance. 13-15)Pub Date: May 29, 2012
ISBN: 978-0-06-201201-2
Page Count: 496
Publisher: HarperTeen
Review Posted Online: Feb. 21, 2012
Kirkus Reviews Issue: March 15, 2012
Busy, but at least there’s a death ray
A pair of teen detectives bops between London and Cairo in a steampunk adventure that would probably make a better movie than it does a book.
Octavia Nightingale and Sebastian Tweed return in this sequel to The Lazarus Machine (2012), solving mysteries in a Victorian London jam-packed with automatons powered by human souls and carriages running on Tesla turbines. Their search for Octavia’s kidnapped mother entangles them in a larger mystery, with missing scientists and Egyptophile cultists around every corner. Each solved puzzle reveals a further complication: traitors, lizard people, rocket launchers—even a secret world. Perhaps the number of threads is too many to keep under control; some characters are dropped abruptly, while one major arc comes to a character-building ending without ever developing through a beginning or middle. The overall mystery is impenetrable, but the set dressing of “vacuum tubes and wiring...tools and gears, clocks, glass beakers filled with strange liquids, and disassembled automatons” makes the right backdrop for a novel that climaxes with an airship-vs.-ornithopter dogfight over London. Purists take note: Among the myriad errors and inconsistencies are copious anachronisms detracting from the Victorian feel.
Busy, but at least there’s a death ray . (Steampunk. 15-17)Pub Date: Oct. 15, 2013
ISBN: 978-1-61614-857-7
Page Count: 295
Publisher: Pyr/Prometheus Books
Review Posted Online: Aug. 13, 2013
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Sept. 1, 2013
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