A skilled, incisive, and smartly conceived set of tales.
This debut collection of short stories by McLoof examines the expectations and disappointments of human relations.
Anhedonia, the title of this collection, refers to an inability to experience pleasure. Many of the characters in these seven stories face varying degrees of tedium or ennui in their lives. The opening story, “Space, Whether, and Why,” takes the form of a dense paragraph, written in the first person, that relates the intricate details of a relationship in which one partner asks for “space.” In “Disneyland,” a 16-year-old lesbian decides to ask her father for advice about girls. The title story continues the theme of potentially uncomfortable encounters when a father decides to take his 8-year-old daughter along during a Chili’s dinner date. “How to Start Again in Twelve Easy Steps” is a series of notes-to-self on how to rekindle a failing relationship, such as “When she calls, be happy. Relish the sound of the ringtone.” Finally, in the closing story, “Negotiation,” a couple enter peace talks after a split. This brief, 35-page collection showcases McLoof’s versatility; “Negotiation,” the strongest piece, is written in the second person, which effectively places the reader in the front seat of an emotional roller coaster: “Your fingernails are dirty and your clothes are stained with paint but that does not mean you are unprepared to meet with her right now.” The anxious negotiation is peppered with believable statements of reconciling lovers: “I want to be who I am with you all the time.” McLoof also has an enjoyably succinct descriptive style: “She…sees this woman wrapped around her father like a strait jacket.” Some may find the collection’s opening story a challenge, as its conversational flow can prove overwhelming: “I asked you what you needed ‘space’ for, as in what is it you do when you’re taking your ‘space’ rather than what kind of a person asks for ‘space.’ ” However, it’s a clever replication of how a person in a struggling relationship communicates their heightened, overwrought emotions. Overall, McLoof’s nuanced, perceptive study of how humans interact will leave readers wanting more.
A skilled, incisive, and smartly conceived set of tales.Pub Date: Oct. 7, 2022
ISBN: 9781646629817
Page Count: 64
Publisher: Finishing Line Press
Review Posted Online: Dec. 12, 2022
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Feb. 1, 2023
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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An affecting portrait of a prickly woman.
A lifetime’s worth of letters combine to portray a singular character.
Sybil Van Antwerp, a cantankerous but exceedingly well-mannered septuagenarian, is the titular correspondent in Evans’ debut novel. Sybil has retired from a beloved job as chief clerk to a judge with whom she had previously been in private legal practice. She is the divorced mother of two living adult children and one who died when he was 8. She is a reader of novels, a gardener, and a keen observer of human nature. But the most distinguishing thing about Sybil is her lifelong practice of letter writing. As advancing vision problems threaten Sybil’s carefully constructed way of life—in which letters take the place of personal contact and engagement—she must reckon with unaddressed issues from her past that threaten the house of cards (letters, really) she has built around herself. Sybil’s relationships are gradually revealed in the series of letters sent to and received from, among others, her brother, sister-in-law, children, former work associates, and, intriguingly, literary icons including Joan Didion and Larry McMurtry. Perhaps most affecting is the series of missives Sybil writes but never mails to a shadowy figure from her past. Thoughtful musings on the value and immortal quality of letters and the written word populate one of Sybil’s notes to a young correspondent while other messages are laugh-out-loud funny, tinged with her characteristic blunt tartness. Evans has created a brusque and quirky yet endearing main character with no shortage of opinions and advice for others but who fails to excavate the knotty difficulties of her own life. As Sybil grows into a delayed self-awareness, her letters serve as a chronicle of fitful growth.
An affecting portrait of a prickly woman.Pub Date: May 6, 2025
ISBN: 9780593798430
Page Count: 304
Publisher: Crown
Review Posted Online: Feb. 15, 2025
Kirkus Reviews Issue: March 15, 2025
A warm and winning "When Harry Met Sally…" update that hits all the perfect notes.
A travel writer has one last shot at reconnecting with the best friend she just might be in love with.
Poppy and Alex couldn't be more different. She loves wearing bright colors while he prefers khakis and a T-shirt. She likes just about everything while he’s a bit more discerning. And yet, their opposites-attract friendship works because they love each other…in a totally platonic way. Probably. Even though they have their own separate lives (Poppy lives in New York City and is a travel writer with a popular Instagram account; Alex is a high school teacher in their tiny Ohio hometown), they still manage to get together each summer for one fabulous vacation. They grow closer every year, but Poppy doesn’t let herself linger on her feelings for Alex—she doesn’t want to ruin their friendship or the way she can be fully herself with him. They continue to date other people, even bringing their serious partners on their summer vacations…but then, after a falling-out, they stop speaking. When Poppy finds herself facing a serious bout of ennui, unhappy with her glamorous job and the life she’s been dreaming of forever, she thinks back to the last time she was truly happy: her last vacation with Alex. And so, though they haven’t spoken in two years, she asks him to take another vacation with her. She’s determined to bridge the gap that’s formed between them and become best friends again, but to do that, she’ll have to be honest with Alex—and herself—about her true feelings. In chapters that jump around in time, Henry shows readers the progression (and dissolution) of Poppy and Alex’s friendship. Their slow-burn love story hits on beloved romance tropes (such as there unexpectedly being only one bed on the reconciliation trip Poppy plans) while still feeling entirely fresh. Henry’s biggest strength is in the sparkling, often laugh-out-loud-funny dialogue, particularly the banter-filled conversations between Poppy and Alex. But there’s depth to the story, too—Poppy’s feeling of dissatisfaction with a life that should be making her happy as well as her unresolved feelings toward the difficult parts of her childhood make her a sympathetic and relatable character. The end result is a story that pays homage to classic romantic comedies while having a point of view all its own.
A warm and winning "When Harry Met Sally…" update that hits all the perfect notes.Pub Date: May 11, 2021
ISBN: 978-1-9848-0675-8
Page Count: 384
Publisher: Berkley
Review Posted Online: March 2, 2021
Kirkus Reviews Issue: March 15, 2021
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