Strong lead characters, but this stalls after a promising start.
In his debut novel, Gumbs brings two strangers into a romantic entanglement.
In this first volume of a planned series, Gumbs introduces readers to Jaacyn and Georgia, who start at odds but become lovers in a very unlikely scenario. The UDM in the title stands for “uniquely defining moment” (among other things), and each character undergoes certain testing situations. In the beginning, Jaacyn, a black man from Anguilla, is stalking Georgia, a white woman, until both are injured in a terrorist subway bombing, after which they are inexplicably drawn together. Each has secrets that Gumbs never addresses. Georgia escaped from and was paid off by a secret organization, which she still fears. Jaacyn communicates telepathically with an unseen being named Protocol. Gumbs spends many pages on flat secondary characters: Georgia’s caring but weak-willed mother, Vernie; her bigoted father, Malcolm; and Jaacyn’s easily conned cousin Curtiss. These characters seem to exist largely to be recipients of Jaacyn’s lectures on societal ills: “If you believe race is that important, you’re of the wrong race.” Gumbs’ plot hinges on the development of Jaacyn and Georgia’s relationship; they are both intriguing leads, but they still fail to learn much of substance about each other. Instead, there’s too much of Curtiss’ running to Jaacyn for loans to cover his debts, Vernie’s health scare, and Malcolm’s fretting about his daughter keeping company with a black man. There are also several chapters about Jaacyn’s bizarre night with a prostitute. Every time it seems like a reveal about either Jaacyn or Georgia might be imminent, the meandering narrative diverts to a secondary character and his or her problem. As a result, by novel’s end, there is little impetus for readers to continue to future books in this series.
Strong lead characters, but this stalls after a promising start.Pub Date: Sept. 2, 2017
ISBN: 978-1-4787-8977-2
Page Count: 298
Publisher: Outskirts Press
Review Posted Online: May 29, 2018
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
More of the same: Sparks has his recipe, and not a bit of it is missing here. It’s the literary equivalent of high fructose...
Sparks (The Longest Ride, 2013, etc.) serves up another heaping helping of sentimental Southern bodice-rippage.
Gone are the blondes of yore, but otherwise the Sparks-ian formula is the same: a decent fellow from a good family who’s gone through some rough patches falls in love with a decent girl from a good family who’s gone through some rough patches—and is still suffering the consequences. The guy is innately intelligent but too quick to throw a punch, the girl beautiful and scary smart. If you hold a fatalistic worldview, then you’ll know that a love between them can end only in tears. If you hold a Sparks-ian one, then true love will prevail, though not without a fight. Voilà: plug in the character names, and off the story goes. In this case, Colin Hancock is the misunderstood lad who’s decided to reform his hard-knuckle ways but just can’t keep himself from connecting fist to face from time to time. Maria Sanchez is the dedicated lawyer in harm’s way—and not just because her boss is a masher. Simple enough. All Colin has to do is punch the partner’s lights out: “The sexual harassment was bad enough, but Ken was a bully as well, and Colin knew from his own experience that people like that didn’t stop abusing their power unless someone made them. Or put the fear of God into them.” No? No, because bound up in Maria’s story, wrinkled with the doings of an equally comely sister, there’s a stalker and a closet full of skeletons. Add Colin’s back story, and there’s a perfect couple in need of constant therapy, as well as a menacing cop. Get Colin and Maria to smooching, and the plot thickens as the storylines entangle. Forget about love—can they survive the evil that awaits them out in the kudzu-choked woods?
More of the same: Sparks has his recipe, and not a bit of it is missing here. It’s the literary equivalent of high fructose corn syrup, stickily sweet but irresistible.Pub Date: Oct. 13, 2015
ISBN: 978-1-4555-2061-9
Page Count: 304
Publisher: Grand Central Publishing
Review Posted Online: Sept. 30, 2015
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Oct. 15, 2015
Spielman’s debut charms as Brett briskly careens from catastrophe to disaster to enlightenment.
Devastated by her mother’s death, Brett Bohlinger consumes a bottle of outrageously expensive Champagne and trips down the stairs at the funeral luncheon. Add embarrassed to devastated. Could things get any worse? Of course they can, and they do—at the reading of the will.
Instead of inheriting the position of CEO at the family’s cosmetics firm—a position she has been groomed for—she’s given a life list she wrote when she was 14 and an ultimatum: Complete the goals, or lose her inheritance. Luckily, her mother, Elizabeth, has crossed off some of the more whimsical goals, including running with the bulls—too risky! Having a child, buying a horse, building a relationship with her (dead) father, however, all remain. Brad, the handsome attorney charged with making sure Brett achieves her goals, doles out a letter from her mother with each success. Warmly comforting, Elizabeth’s letters uncannily—and quite humorously—predict Brett’s side of the conversations. Brett grudgingly begins by performing at a local comedy club, an experience that proves both humiliating and instructive: Perfection is overrated, and taking risks is exhilarating. Becoming an awesome teacher, however, seems impossible given her utter lack of classroom management skills. Teaching homebound children offers surprising rewards, though. Along Brett’s journey, many of the friends (and family) she thought would support her instead betray her. Luckily, Brett’s new life is populated with quirky, sharply drawn characters, including a pregnant high school student living in a homeless shelter, a psychiatrist with plenty of time to chat about troubled children, and one of her mother’s dearest, most secret companions. A 10-step program for the grief-stricken, Brett’s quest brings her back to love, the best inheritance of all.
Spielman’s debut charms as Brett briskly careens from catastrophe to disaster to enlightenment.Pub Date: July 30, 2013
ISBN: 978-0-345-54087-4
Page Count: 368
Publisher: Bantam
Review Posted Online: June 8, 2013
Kirkus Reviews Issue: June 15, 2013
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