A young stop-motion-film enthusiast’s encounter with anorexia, as narrated by...his eating disorder?
Readers first meet Mike through the eyes of an unidentified narrator who is following him. It gradually becomes clear that the narrator is not a person but a voice Mike sometimes hears. The voice gains influence when Mike’s father leaves his mother for a younger woman, and soon, Mike is starving himself. A new friend, Amber Alley, teaches him to eat as little as possible and gives him tips on how to hide what he’s doing from his parents. Mike’s eating disorder ramps up jarringly quickly, particularly given that its only apparent external trigger is a conversation in which Mike hounds a girl to go out with him, then demands to know if her refusal is because he’s fat (whether Mike is fat by anyone’s standards but the voice’s is unclear from the text). The story is well-plotted and its prose engaging, but the central conceit leaves a distracting number of questions unanswered. Who is this voice? What are its motivations? Why does it choose Mike?
An ambitious and unusual take on teens and eating disorders—but not an entirely satisfactory one. (Fiction. 12-18)