Winsome and raucous in language but tame in subject matter.
A vibrant love of playful language animates the mundane.
Mash’s poems cover a wide range of topics, but they often marry the minutiae of daily existence with reverberating insights. In “Wallet,” he illuminates the ties that bind us to often overlooked objects: “I love the tug / of you — / pale imprint / of who I am, / calm pull / of the always there.” Other poems take on the making of the bed, in which the billowing sheet acts as a metaphor for a calming hand on a shoulder, or the ultimate vulnerability of sitting in a dentist chair while the professional cosseting serves to mask the violence actually occurring. Though Mash’s language is lively and often on the verge of mischief, it’s also imbued with a tinge of the melancholy. In the title poem, “Buyer’s Remorse,” Mash begins with a list of extravagant purchases but ends with one that hints at the despair of ill-conceived life choices: “[Y]our life laid out on the bed / like some suede suit your wife warned you against. / You’d give it back if you could, but you’ve made / your choice and—hard luck—the outlet takes no returns.” This ever present blend of campy humor and life lessons is often charming, like a parent hedging advice with a joke to lighten the mood. Too many similar musings can grow tiresome, though. For example, four poems are dedicated to individual fingers and the ways in which each holds specific meaning and purpose. However, he regains momentum when he switches his focus to nostalgia; the narrator declares enthusiasm for B-movies and doesn’t worry over deeper meaning. The ease of youth relative to his own maturity finds Mash more wistful: “Grace is now // an afternoon nap / as the drapes sashay / …and blood performs / its clunky round // through fingertips and toes, / and somewhere is // the sound of spokes / ticking to a stop.” Overall, his sheer joy in the multitudes contained within small observations gives his work energy.
Winsome and raucous in language but tame in subject matter.Pub Date: Jan. 1, 2014
ISBN: 978-1625490513
Page Count: 98
Publisher: WordTech Communications
Review Posted Online: Jan. 9, 2015
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
An emotional, captivating Christian story in verse.
Heidish (A Misplaced Woman, 2016, etc.) presents an account of St. Francis of Assisi’s life, as told from his father’s perspective in poetic form.
St. Francis is known as a saint who believed in living the Gospel, gave sermons to birds, and tamed a wolf. Over the course of 84 poems, Heidish tells her own fictionalized version of the saint’s journey. In his youth, Francesco is an apprentice of his father, Pietro Bernardone, a fabric importer. The boy is a sensitive dreamer and nature lover who sees “natural holiness in every living thing.” As an adult, Francesco decides to pursue knighthood, but God warns him to “Go back, child / Serve the master.” He joins the Church of San Damiano, steals his father’s storeroom stock, and sells it to rebuild the church. His furious father chains him in the cellar, and the bishop orders Francesco to repay the debt. Afterward, father and son stop speaking to each other; Francesco becomes a healer of the sick and a proficient preacher. After failing to broker a peace agreement during wartime, Francesco falls into depression and resigns his church position. He retreats to the mountains and eventually dies; it’s only then that Pietro becomes a true follower of St. Francis: “You are the father now and I the son / learning still what it means to be a saint,” he says. Heidish’s decision to tell this story from Pietro’s perspective is what makes this oft-told legend seem fresh again. She uses superb similes and metaphors; for example, at different points, she writes that St. Francis had eyes like “lit wicks” and a spirit that “shone like a clean copper pot.” In another instance, she describes the Church of San Damiano as a place in which “walls crumbled / like stale dry bread.” Following the poems, the author also offers a thorough and engaging historical summary of the real life of St. Francis, which only adds further context and depth to the tale.
An emotional, captivating Christian story in verse.Pub Date: Feb. 23, 2018
ISBN: 978-0-9905262-1-6
Page Count: 146
Publisher: Dolan & Associates
Review Posted Online: April 19, 2018
Kirkus Reviews Issue: June 1, 2018
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
A poignant collection by a talented poet still in search of one defining voice.
A debut volume of poetry explores love and war.
Divided into four sections, Osaki’s book covers vast emotional territories. Section 1, entitled “Walking Back the Cat,” is a reflection on youthful relationships both familial and romantic. “Dying Arts,” the second part, is an examination of war and its brutal consequences. But sections three and four, named “Tradecraft” and “Best Evidence” respectively, do not appear to group poems by theme. The collection opens with “My Father Holding Squash,” one of Osaki’s strongest poems. It introduces the poet’s preoccupation with ephemera—particularly old photographs and letters. Here he describes a photo that is “several years old” of his father in his garden. Osaki muses that an invisible caption reads: “Look at this, you poetry-writing / jackass. Not everything I raise is useless!” The squash is described as “bearable fruit,” wryly hinting that the poet son is considered somewhat less bearable in his father’s eyes. Again, in the poem “Photograph,” Osaki is at his best, sensuously describing a shot of a young woman and the fleeting nature of that moment spent with her: “I know only that I was with her / in a room years ago, and that the sun filtering / into that room faded instantly upon striking the floor.” Wistful nostalgia gives way to violence in “Dying Arts.” Poems such as “Preserve” present a battleground dystopia: “Upturned graves and craters / to swim in when it rains. / Small children shake skulls / like rattles, while older ones carve rifles / out of bone.” Meanwhile, “Silver Star” considers the act of escorting the coffin of a dead soldier home, and “Gun Song” ruminates on owning a weapon to protect against home invasion. The language is more jagged here but powerfully unsettling nonetheless. The collection boasts a range of promising poetic voices, but they do not speak to one another, a common pitfall found in debuts. “Walking Back the Cat” is outstanding in its refined attention to detail; the sections following it read as though they have been produced by two or more other poets. Nevertheless, this is thoughtful, timely writing that demands further attention.
A poignant collection by a talented poet still in search of one defining voice.Pub Date: Jan. 31, 2018
ISBN: 978-1-984198-32-7
Page Count: 66
Publisher: CreateSpace
Review Posted Online: June 26, 2018
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
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