A promising start to a new series.
A middle school girl travels to another dimension to save her parents’ homeland from destruction in this debut middle-grade sci-fi/fantasy novel.
On the last day of seventh grade, Veronica comes home to learn that her parents are actually exiled royalty from the land of Enos on the planet Dara, which exists in another dimension. The world that her parents used to rule faces a serious invasion threat, and Veronica finds out that she’s the only person who can communicate with the Prestar, a device which holds the Solito, a stone that allows Enos’ royalty to use their magical powers. An old friend from Enos named Dolches Carl escorts Veronica across the dimensions, and teenage horse thief Tiber and hapless but beautiful Princess Selmalina soon join them on their quest. When a traitorous king imprisons Dolches, the three young people must work together to save Enos. Although Veronica and Selmalina mostly stay focused on the existential threat, they also devote a lot of energy to a Mean Girls–style rivalry driven by Veronica’s crush on Tiber and her jealousy of Selmalina’s beauty. At the book’s conclusion, Veronica returns to her home and her parents, who are still banished from Enos—but the stage is clearly set for future installments. Fantasy fans may not find the book’s length to be a problem, but a more concise narrative might have kept the plot moving more steadily between perils. The writing is uneven, with clever chapter headings (“I Find Out My Parents Used to Be Interesting”; “I Almost Do Something Right”) but sometimes-clunky prose (“Selmalina, Dolches, and I settled into reasonably relaxed-looking positions”; “Tiber said something that I believed was a Sapangan curse because I heard my dad say the same word one day when he accidentally hit his thumb with a hammer”). However, the vibrant characters, both human and non, are consistently strong throughout.
A promising start to a new series.Pub Date: Oct. 1, 2013
ISBN: 978-1489531742
Page Count: 296
Publisher: CreateSpace
Review Posted Online: Dec. 30, 2013
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
Read this for the action-packed plot, not character development or worldbuilding.
On the orders of her mother, a woman goes to dragon-riding school.
Even though her mother is a general in Navarre’s army, 20-year-old Violet Sorrengail was raised by her father to follow his path as a scribe. After his death, though, Violet's mother shocks her by forcing her to enter the elite and deadly dragon rider academy at Basgiath War College. Most students die at the War College: during training sessions, at the hands of their classmates, or by the very dragons they hope to one day be paired with. From Day One, Violet is targeted by her classmates, some because they hate her mother, others because they think she’s too physically frail to succeed. She must survive a daily gauntlet of physical challenges and the deadly attacks of classmates, which she does with the help of secret knowledge handed down by her two older siblings, who'd been students there before her. Violet is at the mercy of the plot rather than being in charge of it, hurtling through one obstacle after another. As a result, the story is action-packed and fast-paced, but Violet is a strange mix of pure competence and total passivity, always managing to come out on the winning side. The book is categorized as romantasy, with Violet pulled between the comforting love she feels from her childhood best friend, Dain Aetos, and the incendiary attraction she feels for family enemy Xaden Riorson. However, the way Dain constantly undermines Violet's abilities and his lack of character development make this an unconvincing storyline. The plots and subplots aren’t well-integrated, with the first half purely focused on Violet’s training, followed by a brief detour for romance, and then a final focus on outside threats.
Read this for the action-packed plot, not character development or worldbuilding.Pub Date: May 2, 2023
ISBN: 9781649374042
Page Count: 528
Publisher: Red Tower
Review Posted Online: Jan. 12, 2024
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Unrelenting, and not in a good way.
A young Navarrian woman faces even greater challenges in her second year at dragon-riding school.
Violet Sorrengail did all the normal things one would do as a first-year student at Basgiath War College: made new friends, fell in love, and survived multiple assassination attempts. She was also the first rider to ever bond with two dragons: Tairn, a powerful black dragon with a distinguished battle history, and Andarna, a baby dragon too young to carry a rider. At the end of Fourth Wing (2023), Violet and her lover, Xaden Riorson, discovered that Navarre is under attack from wyvern, evil two-legged dragons, and venin, soulless monsters that harvest energy from the ground. Navarrians had always been told that these were monsters of legend and myth, not real creatures dangerously close to breaking through Navarre’s wards and attacking civilian populations. In this overly long sequel, Violet, Xaden, and their dragons are determined to find a way to protect Navarre, despite the fact that the army and government hid the truth about these creatures. Due to the machinations of several traitorous instructors at Basgiath, Xaden and Violet are separated for most of the book—he’s stationed at a distant outpost, leaving her to handle the treacherous, cutthroat world of the war college on her own. Violet is repeatedly threatened by her new vice commandant, a brutal man who wants to silence her. Although Violet and her dragons continue to model extreme bravery, the novel feels repetitive and more than a little sloppy, leaving obvious questions about the world unanswered. The book is full of action and just as full of plot holes, including scenes that are illogical or disconnected from the main narrative. Secondary characters are ignored until a scene requires them to assist Violet or to be killed in the endless violence that plagues their school.
Unrelenting, and not in a good way.Pub Date: Nov. 7, 2023
ISBN: 9781649374172
Page Count: 640
Publisher: Red Tower
Review Posted Online: Jan. 20, 2024
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