In Henderson’s (Branded, 2011) YA novel, an unhappy, insecure 16-year-old meets a pair of “gorgeous” twin boys who reveal her true purpose in life.
Hayden Heyer’s first day of school starts off with the typical hiccups. A trip to the office to get help with her broken locker only compounds things when she spots identical, blue-eyed James and Joe Sparks, new to Henderson High—and, eerily, in almost every one of her classes. At first, she plays coy and even tries to avoid the two. Once she realizes her new relationship riles the entitled “fembots” at school, she accepts their friendly advances, which include lessons on meditation and how to live a healthier lifestyle. When a local gang confronts the trio, the twins begin to reveal their true identities as immortal “protectors,” second-class angels sent by God to train Hayden to control the elements and “round ball-like spheres” of energy so that she might fulfill her heavenly duty as a “balancer” on earth, “able to handle any physical problem like: protecting an innocent, freeing the trapped, or stopping a crime.” What she can’t handle is her heart as she struggles to decide which of the Sparks brothers she loves. Ethereal in both subject and style, Henderson’s book doesn’t rise to the challenge of its promising beginning. Told in first-person, the story switches verb tenses and repeats words frequently: On one page, characters “scan” the cafeteria (twice) before “scanning” the menu. The dialogue smacks of melodrama, and the abuse of adverbs is constant: “ ‘You throw like a girl,’ James commented competitively.” The dearth of conflict or character development, despite Henderson’s lofty imaginary tangents, confounds. For a few maddening chapters, the reader follows Hayden and her slightly sociopathic guardians as they go to the mall to shop. Without climax or resolution, the book sputters to an undramatic cliff-hanger—and the promise of a sequel—without providing much satisfaction.
A well-imagined premise with a flat narrative arc.
In this debut middle-grade novel, a lonely boy finds friendship and learns about the magic of human connection.
Defined by the large mole on his lip, 10-year-old Gregory has grown distant from his family. He is friendless and withdrawn. Then one night a strange little creature emerges from Gregory’s mole. It is riding a (quite lovable) cockroach and can change size. This is the Grimbockle. The Grimbockle—one of many Bockles, who, like Palmer Cox’s Brownies, live at the peripheries of human awareness—tends to the exoodles that bind people together. Exoodles are long, transparent, noodlelike threads and are usually invisible. Once Gregory has his eyeballs painted with Carrot Juicy, though, he can see them. He joins the Grimbockle and the roach, traveling the exoodles as if on a high-speed roller coaster. Exoodles wither and die when people don’t look after their relationships. The Grimbockle is trying to repair a particularly sickly exoodle that links a boy to his mother. Can Gregory help—and can he mend the exoodles in his own life? Schubert follows delightedly in the footsteps of Roald Dahl, opening her unfortunate young protagonist’s eyes to a previously unseen world both weird and wondrous (yet for all its outlandish magic, oddly logical). The scenario is one of riotous imagination, while the Grimbockle himself—brought sweetly to life in black-and-white illustrations by Kraft—is a sprightly and good-natured little person, full of the type of singsong infelicities found in Dahl’s beloved nonhuman characters: “Is you ever seeing glimpses of squiggles in the corners of your twinklers but then they is disappearing in a snippety blink?” “ ‘Exoodles!’ shouted the Grimbockle in triumph. ‘Sometimes, hoo-mans is getting so twisty and wound up in extra exoodles that they is feeling gloomy blue and heavy all day long.’ ” The story is perhaps too much of a parable to fully match Dahl’s template; the adventure is safer and the threats less dark. Nonetheless, readers should fall willingly and with thrilled abandon into the fizzy, fanciful world of Gregory and his Grimbockle friend.
A beautifully realized daydream; a fun yet thoughtful exploration of the complexities and possibilities hidden beneath surface appearances.
A lost bunny searches for his mother in this debut picture book.
The youngster is already lost in the beginning of Lakhiani’s version of the time-honored tale of a lost child reuniting witha parent. On a foggy day, a young rabbit finds that he doesn’t recognize where he is. He calls for his mother, but instead of her voice in response, he hears the hum of a bumblebee. The nameless little rabbit asks if the bee knows where his home is, but the bee doesn’t and sends him on to the wise owl, who “sees everything.” As the little rabbit runs through the “eerie” fog toward the owl’s tree, he meets a kind squirrel. “I’ve lost my mother….I am lost and scared,” explains the little rabbit. The squirrel leads the rabbit to the wise owl’s tree, which the rabbit climbs to ask the owl, “[C]an you see where I live?” The fog is too thick for the owl to spot little rabbit’s home, so he gives the little rabbit a snack and invites him to rest. Falling asleep, the little rabbit dreams of his mother but is awakened by the hooting, buzzing and chattering of his three new friends. Looking around, he sees his mother, who embraces him: “I will never again let you out of my sight,” she tells him. The digitized art by Adams, some of which is credited to Thinkstock, is in a cartoon style that clearly delineates the characters but includes a few anthropomorphic details—a graduation cap for the owl, spectacles for the squirrel and only four legs for the bee—that add little value. Since the story centers on the little rabbit failing to recognize where he is, the choice to make the right-hand page of every spread identical is potentially confusing; regardless, it’s repetitious. The text fails in the opposite direction: It doesn’t create the typical patterns that can help toddlers follow the story, build anticipation and learn to chime in—steps on the path to reading alone. Erratic rhythms, changing stanza lengths and rhyme schemes, and awkward syntax undercut attempts to enliven the tale with poetry.
A story with a tried-and-true plot that needs to freshen up its presentation.