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WRITING ADVICE FOR TEENS

CREATING STORIES

A distracting preoccupation with being culturally relevant doesn’t prevent this guide from offering realistic, creditable...

This writing guide provides practical information and exercises to make the intimidating world of writing more accessible to aspiring young authors.

In this manual, fiction and nonfiction writer Kalmbach (The Caldarian Conflict, 2011) gives detailed, structured long- and short-term writing goals for inexperienced writers who want to become more disciplined in their craft. It includes valuable information about online tools and websites that help facilitate the writing process, as well as useful word-count guidelines and character sheets. The author also offers suggestions for dealing with the various distractions that can confront the contemporary teenage writer. While the book gives premature, sometimes excessive publishing information for such young writers, it wisely emphasizes the importance of receiving feedback from fellow writers and creating an encouraging writing community. Each chapter includes helpful idea-generating exercises, tips, writing samples and personal anecdotes. The author’s familiar tone is often welcoming, but in several instances, he makes awkward, strained attempts to be hip and relevant: He frequently tries to capitalize on the vampire trend in YA fiction, while references to wizardry, specifically the Harry Potter series, are recurrent yet out of touch. Also, the importance of avoiding cliché is not sufficiently addressed. In fact, some of the writing samples seem to encourage overt sentimentality. In a description of a cherished bookend, for example, he writes, “As a sign of my mother’s love, I’ll treasure it forever.” Toward the end of the book there’s also a somewhat arbitrary moral lesson about the dangers of drugs. More relevant advice, though, is the emphasis on reading, meeting deadlines and reaching quotas to eventually create a large, diverse body of work.

A distracting preoccupation with being culturally relevant doesn’t prevent this guide from offering realistic, creditable advice.

Pub Date: April 24, 2012

ISBN: 978-0984654536

Page Count: 174

Publisher: CreateSpace

Review Posted Online: Aug. 24, 2012

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JUPITER STORM

In more ways than one, a tale about young creatures testing their wings; a moving, entertaining winner.

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A fifth-grade New Orleans girl discovers a mysterious chrysalis containing an unexpected creature in this middle-grade novel.

Jacquelyn Marie Johnson, called Jackie, is a 10-year-old African-American girl, the second oldest and the only girl of six siblings. She’s responsible, smart, and enjoys being in charge; she likes “paper dolls and long division and imagining things she had never seen.” Normally, Jackie has no trouble obeying her strict but loving parents. But when her potted snapdragon acquires a peculiar egg or maybe a chrysalis (she dubs it a chrysalegg), Jackie’s strong desire to protect it runs up against her mother’s rule against plants in the house. Jackie doesn’t exactly mean to lie, but she tells her mother she needs to keep the snapdragon in her room for a science project and gets permission. Jackie draws the chrysalegg daily, waiting for something to happen as it gets larger. When the amazing creature inside breaks free, Jackie is more determined than ever to protect it, but this leads her further into secrets and lies. The results when her parents find out are painful, and resolving the problem will take courage, honesty, and trust. Dumas (Jaden Toussaint, the Greatest: Episode 5, 2017, etc.) presents a very likable character in Jackie. At 10, she’s young enough to enjoy playing with paper dolls but has a maturity that even older kids can lack. She’s resourceful, as when she wants to measure a red spot on the chrysalegg; lacking calipers, she fashions one from her hairpin. Jackie’s inward struggle about what to obey—her dearest wishes or the parents she loves—is one many readers will understand. The book complicates this question by making Jackie’s parents, especially her mother, strict (as one might expect to keep order in a large family) but undeniably loving and protective as well—it’s not just a question of outwitting clueless adults. Jackie’s feelings about the creature (tender and responsible but also more than a little obsessive) are similarly shaded rather than black-and-white. The ending suggests that an intriguing sequel is to come.

In more ways than one, a tale about young creatures testing their wings; a moving, entertaining winner.

Pub Date: Nov. 11, 2017

ISBN: 978-1-943169-32-0

Page Count: 212

Publisher: Plum Street Press

Review Posted Online: Feb. 22, 2018

Kirkus Reviews Issue: April 15, 2018

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BROTHERS IN ARMS

BLUFORD HIGH SERIES #9

A YA novel that treats its subject and its readers with respect while delivering an engaging story.

In the ninth book in the Bluford young-adult series, a young Latino man walks away from violence—but at great personal cost.

In a large Southern California city, 16-year-old Martin Luna hangs out on the fringes of gang life. He’s disaffected, fatherless and increasingly drawn into the orbit of the older, rougher Frankie. When a stray bullet kills Martin’s adored 8-year-old brother, Huero, Martin seems to be heading into a life of crime. But Martin’s mother, determined not to lose another son, moves him to another neighborhood—the fictional town of Bluford, where he attends the racially diverse Bluford High. At his new school, the still-grieving Martin quickly makes enemies and gets into trouble. But he also makes friends with a kind English teacher and catches the eye of Vicky, a smart, pretty and outgoing Bluford student. Martin’s first-person narration supplies much of the book’s power. His dialogue is plain, but realistic and believable, and the authors wisely avoid the temptation to lard his speech with dated and potentially embarrassing slang. The author draws a vivid and affecting picture of Martin’s pain and confusion, bringing a tight-lipped teenager to life. In fact, Martin’s character is so well drawn that when he realizes the truth about his friend Frankie, readers won’t feel as if they are watching an after-school special, but as though they are observing the natural progression of Martin’s personal growth. This short novel appears to be aimed at urban teens who don’t often see their neighborhoods portrayed in young-adult fiction, but its sophisticated characters and affecting story will likely have much wider appeal.

A YA novel that treats its subject and its readers with respect while delivering an engaging story.

Pub Date: Jan. 1, 2004

ISBN: 978-1591940173

Page Count: 152

Publisher: Townsend Press

Review Posted Online: Jan. 26, 2013

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