A gentle SoCal love story that’s hampered by awkward execution.
In Hay’s novel, a young man moves from Oklahoma to California and begins working at a bank, where he meets and woos the woman of his dreams.
Twenty-nine-year-old Michael Pilgrim feels lucky to have landed a job at SoCal Federal, where he has his own office, a great salary, and hits it off with the fun, flirty, female administrative staff. It’s the late 1980s, and bankers in coastal cities are living large. When he’s introduced to interior design consultant Kathryn Summerfield at a party, he’s instantly smitten, and she seems to return his affections; however, Kathryn’s roommate, Zeta, isn’t fond of him. He and Kathryn begin dating, and she eventually invites him to her firm’s annual client dinner and Christmas party. He gets stuck working late on an important loan closing, though, so he’s forced to cancel, and Kathryn is devastated. She’d been with other men who’ve let her down; she’s not sure she can handle another disappointing relationship, and Zeta seizes the opportunity to fan the flames of doubt. Michael hopes to find a way back into Kathryn’s heart, but he wonders if he’s already lost her. Hay’s novel follows his Oklahoman protagonist as he navigates the emotional rollercoaster of a new life on the West Coast. However, the third-person narration provides such specific details about Michael’s comings and goings that it reads a lot like a police report at times—outlining the main characters’ whereabouts, what time they arrived, how long they stayed, and where they went next, without regard for whether this information is relevant to the overall plot. Similarly, the author provides detailed explanations about technicalities of loan documents that feel more like a business lesson than a work of fiction. The worldbuilding is also lacking, with little character development and scantly described settings. Even so, the love story at the novel’s center is sweet, and there’s a pleasant undercurrent of optimism that readers may find endearing.
A gentle SoCal love story that’s hampered by awkward execution.Pub Date: N/A
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Review Posted Online: Oct. 10, 2024
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Uneven but fitfully amusing.
Betrayed by her husband, a severely depressed young woman gets drawn into the over-the-top festivities at a lavish wedding.
Phoebe Stone, who teaches English literature at a St. Louis college, is plotting her own demise. Her husband, Matt, has left her for another woman, and Phoebe is taking it hard. Indeed, she's determined just where and how she will end it all: at an oceanfront hotel in Newport, where she will lie on a king-sized canopy bed and take a bottle of her cat’s painkillers. At the hotel, Phoebe meets bride-to-be Lila, a headstrong rich girl presiding over her own extravagant six-day wedding celebration. Lila thought she had booked every room in the hotel, and learning of Phoebe's suicidal intentions, she forbids this stray guest from disrupting the nuptials: “No. You definitely can’t kill yourself. This is my wedding week.” After the punchy opening, a grim flashback to the meltdown of Phoebe's marriage temporarily darkens the mood, but things pick up when spoiled Lila interrupts Phoebe's preparations and sweeps her up in the wedding juggernaut. The slide from earnest drama to broad farce is somewhat jarring, but from this point on, Espach crafts an enjoyable—if overstuffed—comedy of manners. When the original maid of honor drops out, Phoebe is persuaded, against her better judgment, to take her place. There’s some fun to be had here: The wedding party—including groom-to-be Gary, a widower, and his 11-year-old daughter—takes surfing lessons; the women in the group have a session with a Sex Woman. But it all goes on too long, and the humor can seem forced, reaching a low point when someone has sex with the vintage wedding car (you don’t want to know the details). Later, when two characters have a meet-cute in a hot tub, readers will guess exactly how the marriage plot resolves.
Uneven but fitfully amusing.Pub Date: July 30, 2024
ISBN: 9781250899576
Page Count: 384
Publisher: Henry Holt
Review Posted Online: Sept. 13, 2024
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Suspenseful, full of incident, and not obviously necessary.
Atwood goes back to Gilead.
The Handmaid’s Tale (1985), consistently regarded as a masterpiece of 20th-century literature, has gained new attention in recent years with the success of the Hulu series as well as fresh appreciation from readers who feel like this story has new relevance in America’s current political climate. Atwood herself has spoken about how news headlines have made her dystopian fiction seem eerily plausible, and it’s not difficult to imagine her wanting to revisit Gilead as the TV show has sped past where her narrative ended. Like the novel that preceded it, this sequel is presented as found documents—first-person accounts of life inside a misogynistic theocracy from three informants. There is Agnes Jemima, a girl who rejects the marriage her family arranges for her but still has faith in God and Gilead. There’s Daisy, who learns on her 16th birthday that her whole life has been a lie. And there's Aunt Lydia, the woman responsible for turning women into Handmaids. This approach gives readers insight into different aspects of life inside and outside Gilead, but it also leads to a book that sometimes feels overstuffed. The Handmaid’s Tale combined exquisite lyricism with a powerful sense of urgency, as if a thoughtful, perceptive woman was racing against time to give witness to her experience. That narrator hinted at more than she said; Atwood seemed to trust readers to fill in the gaps. This dynamic created an atmosphere of intimacy. However curious we might be about Gilead and the resistance operating outside that country, what we learn here is that what Atwood left unsaid in the first novel generated more horror and outrage than explicit detail can. And the more we get to know Agnes, Daisy, and Aunt Lydia, the less convincing they become. It’s hard, of course, to compete with a beloved classic, so maybe the best way to read this new book is to forget about The Handmaid’s Tale and enjoy it as an artful feminist thriller.
Suspenseful, full of incident, and not obviously necessary.Pub Date: Sept. 10, 2019
ISBN: 978-0-385-54378-1
Page Count: 432
Publisher: Nan A. Talese
Review Posted Online: Sept. 3, 2019
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Sept. 15, 2019
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