The Royal Secret by John Bentley

The Royal Secret

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Mysteries, conspiracies, hidden identities, and secret codes abound in this debut thriller, which shuttles readers between the modern day and Tudor England.

Reclusive billionaire Abe recently died after finding an elusive plant-based formula that could cure all the world’s ills. However, his wife and lifelong assistant, Mrs. G., charged with the care of his grandchildren, is more concerned with the book she’s writing, which attempts to prove that the Elizabethan lawyer and philosopher Francis Bacon was in fact the son of Queen Elizabeth I, as well as the author of plays attributed to William Shakespeare. As Mrs. G.’s quest for answers takes her to England, and then to France, Germany, and Hungary, she finds herself drawn to Ethan, a mysterious, handsome priest who seems to share her fascination with history and cryptography. Little does she know that Ethan is more than what he seems, and that Abe’s formula might have global implications. Meanwhile, her story is intertwined with that of the life of Bacon as the novel alternates between past and present, spinning the tale of Bacon’s conception, birth, youth, career, and death. At times, this can be a bit much; at just under 450 pages, the novel packs in as many details—including dates, family histories, physical descriptions of characters, codes, Masonry, Rosicrucianism, Shakespearean quotes, and schools of religion—as it can. This often makes the plot lose momentum, as it gets sidetracked in discussions of the influence of the Masons in Washington, D.C., and the significance of the numbers in certain plays. In the present, Mrs. G. proves herself an engaging heroine. However, her storyline is similarly frustrating, as there doesn’t seem to be much of a mystery to solve; Bacon’s origins are revealed from the very beginning of the story, leaving readers in no doubt as to exactly who he is. Mrs. G.’s research doesn’t reveal anything new, but rather confirms everything that’s laid out in Bacon’s chapters, leaving no grand revelation at the novel’s end.

A dense, theory-packed book that will appeal to lovers of historical conspiracies but may leave mystery buffs cold.

Pub Date: June 15th, 2015
ISBN: 978-0-9583034-0-8
Page count: 446pp
Publisher: CreateSpace
Program: Kirkus Indie
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